Booksie Poetry

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

A short poem on Booksie as a site, as a warming-up first poem to me. The shape didn't really turn out the way I wanted, but enjoy. ^^

I just joined Booksie a few weeks ago...
...and I have to say I'm quite glad.
What I at first dismissed as 'mostly emo poetry',
Is actually not that bad.
But what I dislike about this site already,
is my problem with comments.
People seem to comment to get themselves more known,
sometimes without adding any meaningful contents.
But visit this site more often,
And after a few times you will find:
That there still exist people in this world,
That are actually naturally kind.


Submitted: October 05, 2011

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xXMillyXx

the title caught me =] glad it did because im sure lots of people agree with you....that includes me....i like the poems format too it looks neat =D haha great work and welcome to booksie

Wed, October 5th, 2011 7:01pm

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Well, glad you liked it. ^^
I feel welcome to Booksie! =D

By the way, I deleted the other comments, so you don't look too silly. =P
Thanks for reading. :)

Wed, October 5th, 2011 12:47pm

TwoStepz

AWESOME:)!
I agree with the whole 'oooh, I'm going to comment and mention my book because I want people to read it'.
Yeah, that gets to me at times!
Glad someone else realises that.

OH plus, I like the way you formatted your writing, I mean, one paragraph here and one paragraph that there. Nice

Wed, October 5th, 2011 7:05pm

Author
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I like to play with position a lot, yes. ^^
Thanks for your AWESOME comment. =P

Wed, October 5th, 2011 12:40pm

Robert Kerr

Great stuff. Your insights are very accurate. There is a lot of emo / vampire / self-abuse stuff on here, but there's plenty better work too.

Wed, October 5th, 2011 7:16pm

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Glad you agree with me.
Thanks for reading. =D

Wed, October 5th, 2011 12:41pm

vanya shekhar

Oh!
This is some good writing. I am glad that you started publishing your own work too..:}
The best part of your poetry is it's originality and straight forwardness...love it! Also the point made is really true...there indeed are many people who comment only to get noticed...and the ending is perfect and warm..keep writing...
:)

Thu, October 6th, 2011 2:40pm

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I'm glad you liked it. =D
Thanks a lot for reading! :)

Thu, October 6th, 2011 7:51am

bobthebuilder

Cool form, interesting. I like this site, love the chance to read original stuff. Glad I found you.

Sun, November 13th, 2011 2:59pm

Author
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That's a big compliment, thanks!
I like trying something new, and it's nice to see it's working out. =)

Sun, November 13th, 2011 7:10am

Rhia2910

Geez, another creative poem idea! You are on a roll lol! Nice one, and its so true. People will just practically BEG you to read their stuff, posting that over and over..whew, not even taking the time to look at yours. People care more bout their own success. Regardless, that makes this poem even better!

--Rhia:-)

Wed, November 30th, 2011 1:55pm

Author
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Uhm... how does that make this poem better?
Thanks for the comment, I just don't completely understand this part. ^^

Wed, November 30th, 2011 10:44am

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