Daydreaming at school

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

I wrote this poem during a free period at school. This is a fictional poem: I imagined it. This poem is what I was thinking about:

I look at this girl.

She looks at me.

I look away.

She has cute eyes, long hair...

And...

She looks at me.

I wonder where she's thinking of.

I look away.

Her earrings are silver hearts,

She's wearing a black necklace,

Leaning on one hand...

She closes her eyes.

Then she looks at me.

Our eyes meet.

...

My heart skipped a beat,

I... I'm melting

Am I in love?

She smiles at me.

Adorable, irresistibly cute and pretty...

I try to smile back.

She looks away.

Then class is over, everybody gets up and goes to the next lesson.

I try looking at her one more time.

But she doesn't look back at me...


Submitted: October 06, 2011

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TwoStepz

Hello AGAIN! I am officially your new poem stalker;)!
The repetition of 'she looks at me' kind of makes you stop and think, then go 'Wow, she's really into the dude!' and then the ending comes 'but she doesn't look back at me' and your like.. IS THIS GIRL MAD?!-__-!

(; TwoStepz xxx (Here and officially your poem stalker) x

Thu, October 6th, 2011 6:28pm

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Haha, poem stalker huh? xD

Thanks for reading! No REALLY! Comments really brighten my day! =D

Thu, October 6th, 2011 11:32am

PurplePens

That was cute

Tue, January 17th, 2012 10:58pm

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Thanks... :$

Wed, January 18th, 2012 1:22am

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