Out of a billion

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

I can't get her out of my head...

You're on my mind,

All of the time.

Forgetting you for one second,

Is like a crime.

...

Your pretty face,

Your sweet voice.

Out of a billion,

You are the best choice.

...

Please don't go away,

Tell me I can stay.

I may not know what to say...

...

...and I don't know what to do,

Or where to go to...

Without you.

...

I need you,

I want you,

I love you...


Submitted: April 24, 2012

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Stormy Aura Llewellyn

I probably say this a lot, but this HAS to be one of my favourites! Goodness!! You did SUCH a good job of this one. You should be proud, and she should be indefinitely flattered. You really conveyed your emotion beautifully in this particular piece, and as per usual, your formatting is splendid and lends itself well to your work.

Pardon me for my late commenting. I will have you know that I have read all your poems, but my circumstances have made it a bit hard to comment. Anyway, lovely job. (:

Tue, May 8th, 2012 12:45am

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You have many favourites. =P
Many thanks, let's hope she likes this poem as much as you do.. If I'll ever show her. :$ I still have no idea if she likes poetry...

Mon, May 14th, 2012 2:16am

Shannan Browne

So heartfelt... hope that it continues to be awesome for you :-)

Mon, May 14th, 2012 9:01am

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Thanks. I hope so too.. =S

Mon, May 14th, 2012 2:09am

Violet dusk justice finn darrot

wonderul as is the usual! great job!

Thu, July 12th, 2012 1:45pm

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Thank youu! ^^

Sun, July 22nd, 2012 9:34pm

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