What am I doing wrong?

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Sometimes people need to just be silent and listen:

When I kindly ask people to leave.

They stay put.



When I urge people to go away.

They don't move a foot.



When I yell at people to leave,

They request more respect from me.



When I say yelling is the only way to get their attention.

They stubbornly disagree.



When I apologize for my behaviour and again kindly ask them to leave.

They leave, looking funnily at me.


What am I doing wrong?!


"Nothing. They left, and that's what you wanted, right?"

Oh, shut up!

Submitted: October 06, 2011

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LOL! This seemed something everyone could relate to!:D!
Great set out and great poem.

TwoStepz xxx

Thu, October 6th, 2011 6:00pm


I'm so glad you liked it. =D
Thanks for reading! ^^

Thu, October 6th, 2011 11:05am


i really liked this !! its really true as well ...

good job hun

Sat, October 8th, 2011 8:38am


Glad you liked it. =)
But could you please stop calling me hun or sweetie, I'm not your son. =P
You may be 6 years older than I am, but we're all still humans. :)

Sat, October 8th, 2011 1:56am

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