Dancing Stars

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Other  |  House: Booksie Classic


My hopes dance inside my heart. I'm going to hope till what I hope for happens.
I hope the sky with always be so blue and the sun will always shine,
Till night and that the beautiful stars will dance in the sky and in my eyes till dawn.
Beauty is on the inside, where the soul lies. In nature beauty is everywhere.
No matter your skin color or your body type you're still beautiful and nothing can ever change that.
The stars I see them gracefully dancing in the night sky under the moon light, they start to vanish at the dawn.
Stars dance in the sky till dawn appears and they vanish in the distance and the sun awakens from its shadow.
The moon vanishes with the stars and isn't seen till the night after.


Submitted: May 24, 2010

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Caiteeee

This poem is beautiful and I felt so serene reading it. Really good work (:

Tue, May 25th, 2010 12:25am

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Thanks,

Tue, May 25th, 2010 5:53am

Vincey Delaney

oh so lovely!!! You are very descriptive! this one surely caught my heart, Love is a magical word!!!

Wed, May 26th, 2010 7:46am

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Thanks you, I am trying to be more descriptive in my writing. Yes love is a very magical word.

Wed, May 26th, 2010 11:12am

Foliostar

Great job hung on ebery word each one was magical

Thu, May 27th, 2010 7:02pm

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Thanks!!! ^.^

Thu, May 27th, 2010 5:15pm

xxbrokenemogirlxx

great poem. i really liked it. i could imagine and see every detail in the poem, the stars and moon fading. nicely done =]

Thu, May 27th, 2010 7:51pm

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Thanks!!!! :)

Thu, May 27th, 2010 5:15pm

the dead poet

well it was good just as should be






Sat, May 29th, 2010 3:34pm

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thanks XD

Sun, August 8th, 2010 11:25am

A7XRica

Beautiful poem. :)

Sun, May 30th, 2010 10:41pm

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Thanks

Sun, May 30th, 2010 9:44pm

Kairi

Very beautiful! :)
Bravo.

Tue, June 1st, 2010 8:54am

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Thanks!!! :)

Tue, June 1st, 2010 6:59am

Suicidal Thanatophobic

Well done, you managed to express your feelings with writing. Bravo

Fri, July 30th, 2010 9:54pm

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Thanks. XD

Sun, August 8th, 2010 11:25am

Dizzy

this is very pretty, I very much enjoyed it :D
"No matter your skin color or your body type you're still beautiful and nothing can ever change that." was my favourite line.
CONSTRUCTIVE criticism: Just read over it a little bit to make sure some lines make sense or the right word/spelling is there.
But that's my only critique. Otherwise it's gorgeously wonderful!

Mon, August 30th, 2010 11:26pm

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Thanks :3

Mon, August 30th, 2010 4:56pm

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