during the night and during the day...

During the night and during the day

all i ask you is

stay with me tomorrow, tonight, and today.


Submitted: July 26, 2011

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Vickery

Simple and to the point, yet still you can feel the emotion and thought behind it. A little rhyming ditty that gets straight to the point! One spelling mistake on "saty" I believe :)

Tue, July 26th, 2011 8:22pm

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yeah bout that...i just noticed it like couple seconds ago.
SOO shy right now jeesh!.
but thanks alot.

Tue, July 26th, 2011 1:34pm

gambidj

^^ Short but powerful. I like it.

Tue, July 26th, 2011 8:24pm

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thanks!

Tue, July 26th, 2011 1:43pm

StayWithMe3

Simply beautiful (: Good job!

Tue, July 26th, 2011 11:46pm

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Thx
this might sound stupid but bieng new and all it means alot:)

Tue, July 26th, 2011 5:08pm

Frank Ramtahal

Very short but emotional.
Read some of my writing. You would see my style of writing and would learn something.

Wed, July 27th, 2011 3:29pm

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Thx?
I will

Wed, July 27th, 2011 8:58am

ScatteredAshes

Amazing how something so simple, like three phrases, can add so much emotion! :') You're very talented if you can add such strong emotion into those little phrases. xx

Thu, July 28th, 2011 3:51am

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OMG!! thankies!
thats so nice of you to say.
and your just as talented as i am maybe even more:D

Wed, July 27th, 2011 8:59pm

shanaj

amazing work!!!...very beautiful and the way you express your emotions to writing is wonderful!!...:):)

Tue, August 23rd, 2011 6:05pm

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awww:) thank you:D

Tue, August 23rd, 2011 11:44am

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