missing you

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so at my little middle school we had college people come. they did a poetry slam performance, and at the end they told us to take some of the lines they used and put it into our own poem. so this is what i came up with (: we only had a few minutes to do this btw!

i tried to die to get back to you.

to see you again,

that is worth dying for.

to break the bonds

that hold me from the sky.

now your gone,

i have plastic in my heart.

i am beautiful

because i came from you

and i would do anything to be with you

once again.

*RIP uncle dennis ?


Submitted: April 19, 2010

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Oxxie

i like this, it shows hurt and passion. great job!

Tue, April 27th, 2010 7:20pm

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thanks! :)

Tue, April 27th, 2010 4:59pm

Soul Huntress

Stay strong hun'. It's so passionate, emotional and touching. I totally love this poem. I really feel this poem is actually touching me somehow-creepy... Much lvoe-Soul x

Thu, April 29th, 2010 8:15pm

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thanks so much! i really apreciate you taking the time to comment :)

Thu, April 29th, 2010 2:35pm

LaToya93

Like the other two said can really feel the emotion. and many can relate to this good job!

Wed, December 29th, 2010 9:19pm

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thank you! (:

Thu, December 30th, 2010 6:07am

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