Status:
Finished |
Genre: Poetry |
House:
Booksie Classic
Deeper and deeper,
in the dark i go.
How far can i go, and
still find my way out?
No one see's it,
no one really cares.
Is there any reason,
why, i would come back
from the dark?
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Comments
Comment | 16 words
Wed, March 21st, 2007 3:46pm
glenda:
Well written and presented. Clear message. Short and to the point.
Happy trails,
Ed Bradley.
Author
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Comment | 3 words
Wed, March 21st, 2007 5:19pm
thanks i try.
Comment | 15 words
Wed, March 21st, 2007 6:35pm
This was sad but you got all those emotions across in a small way, powerful. 5!
Author
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Comment | 1 words
Wed, March 21st, 2007 7:44pm
thanks.
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