Frozen in Time, A Ghostly Ocean

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The reality of one terribly sad, dreadful story that still lives on, never to be forgotten.

Frozen in Time, A Ghostly Ocean

 

Oh, the world knows the sadness, cold, dark skies

We feel Titanic grief, hear many groans, many cries!

 

The unsinkable had sunk to the bottom, great misery

Those passengers, staff are at rest, April 1912 simply deathly

 

The Ship of Dreams has embarked on a different phase

What's left is quickly eroding, now chilled thoughts amaze

 

Frozen in time, we will always remember a huge loss

Frozen in time, a solid monument and white cross

 

One hundred years of this gruesome, aching fact

With books, photos, movies, icy details surely intact

 

Never to be, once a ship of happiness, glowing fame

In our hearts, proud to hold, TITANIC everlasting name 

 

Always remembered, always in mourning of the coldest, horrible morning, April 15, 1912.


Submitted: April 15, 2012

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jmurch

Beautiful! I had forgot this was the sad time frame of this sad ships painful destiny.

Mon, April 16th, 2012 1:53am

Irwinagain

Yep, a sad day indeed Vincey.

Mon, April 16th, 2012 3:07pm

Kiwi159

I love everything about the Titanic!! The movies everything! It was a horid day for a lot of people...

Mon, April 16th, 2012 5:26pm

Ian Dawn

A memory, a story, a ship, and now a poem. I saw the original movie when I was a young boy and I still remember the way it made me feel back then and its the same today. Such a needless tragedy but such a beautiful poem.

Mon, April 16th, 2012 11:00pm

MyVintageFairytale

This is a very creative poem, I like the way you wrote it. I myself for one have never really cared for the movie titanic or the event (Is that selfish sounding?) I dont intent it to be selfish, but boats sink all the time, its awful. Yes and Titanic is a sad story. I think they mostley just used the story for money though, if you get what i mean.
Amazing Talent though dear, please keep writing.

MyVintageFairytale

Mon, April 16th, 2012 11:34pm

venkata ramana

hmmmmm..
good in deed but a little suggestion: go to the deeper part of the pain that it had and puzzle the situations then see the beauty of your poetry..(implement only if you like)

Tue, April 17th, 2012 11:42am

BITSxOFxKINKY

beautiful 100 year tribute to that infermous tradagy

Wed, April 18th, 2012 3:06pm

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Wed, April 18th, 2012 3:06pm

simplyema

Awwwww... it's so nice of you to make a poem for the people who died in Titanic ... nice poem :))

Fri, April 20th, 2012 4:13am

StrangeMind

This is a very good poem! Sadly, the issue of the Titanic (as bad as this sounds) never interested me in itself, but this poem does interest me, ans I really like it!
Well done, great work!

Fri, April 20th, 2012 9:45pm

softpaw

Beautiful tribute to the people who died on titanic. nice poem.

Mon, April 23rd, 2012 6:07am

youngwriter

Awww, this is really a great tribute to something that have been a part of the history. :D Very good write.

`geraldine

Wed, April 25th, 2012 1:36pm

annat2again

You write of something we still find hard to fathom despite all that is written and replicated. The truth is many lost their lives and something beautiful and man-made felt the fury of nature.

Mon, April 30th, 2012 8:49am

Darklady

what a lovely poem to celebrate the 100 years of Titanic, great job :)

Sat, May 5th, 2012 5:21pm

Basilia

this is the one indeed a tribute to the only TITANIC which sank to the bottom of the seas still alive in our memories. beautifully written :)

Fri, May 18th, 2012 7:18am

jenny2801

this poem is wonderful, well thought out and tear wrenching. i had that so called "phase" where the titanc was the only thing i watched, read about, or even wrote about wonderful poem, keep me updated on your stories! :)
jenny2801

Mon, July 23rd, 2012 10:00pm

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