Searching for clues
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Poem by: Godshelmet
In my cortex of discontent
Lies realisation;
A misguided direction
Without light
Yet, lies in my mind's eye
Hope! A flicker on the candle I carry.
Smoke simmers
With every thought,
Every fume
Consumes every tentative breath,
Until all that exists
Are converging clouds
That equate my tongue.
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flicker on the candle...very beautiful expresstion that let readers imagine depth of the darkness
that surrounding you, color of flame, e,etc etc.. this one is touched to my heart. keep it up!
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Thank you Scent. i am glad this poem has touched your heart.
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