You killed me so i'll repay you

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Horror  |  House: Booksie Classic
I wrote this story when I was twelve years old.

Submitted: April 25, 2011

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Submitted: April 25, 2011



"This is dedicated to my big sister Melissa Hamilton because she love's horror and that's one thing me and her will always have in common I love you big sis!"


"You know the old house on the corner of Henderson St?" A girl asked her group of friends on their way to school "Yea..why?" Her friends asked curiously "I heard that a girl named Riley was found dead under her bed in that house" The girl stated. "We've heard of it too in chain mail don't be scared them they are always fake they never work" Her friends said to calm their nerves down. "Yea your exactly right I just wonder why no one moves in that old house." her friends looked at each other and strugged "There is someone moving in there..A girl named Francesca Crumpet" The girl started to giggle "That's a weird name poor girl" the girl and her friends continued walking to school disappearing around the corner.

"Mom? Where are you?" Francesca asked while walking through her new house "Mom!?" Francesca went into her mom's room and as she looked around she glanced at her mom's bed and saw a girl under it. Francesca gasped and jumped back she closed her eyes and when she opened them again the girl was gone. She spun around and bumped into her mom she screamed and fell to the floor. "Whoa OK?" Her mom Monica asked nicely "Yes just jumpy this house is old and it scares me..the rumors don't help that fear much..its got me seeing things" Francesca said with a laugh. "Oh dear what rumors?" Monica asked curiously "That a girl died here..its ridiculous I know..Can we switch rooms?" Francesca asked as she looked at her mom's room again. "I thought you wanted the bigger room?" Monica asked "Changed my mind.." Francesca said with a smile. "Alright...we can switch rooms" Monica said as she walked to the kitchen to make dinner.

Two weeks later.

"Your the new girl right?" A tall guy with goku type hair asked "Uh..Yea..Who are you?" Francesca asked."I'm Hagan..Is it true that you live in the old house on the corner of Henderson St.? Hagan asked. "Yes..why?" Francesca asked. Hagan took out his phone and showed Francesca a picture message. "This message was sent to me five minutes before they found her.."

I was just murdered and hidden under my bed, He cut me everywhere and then drowned me in pure cold water. COMEFINDME Tehehehehe"

"But how do you know she was seriously dead and not pretending..Look at her she looks like she is alive does she not?" Francesca asked in a shaky voice. "Five minutes after I got this text my dad received a phone call stating that she was dead..she was my girlfriend even if this was a joke she would not be one to pull something like this off.." Hagan looked at her and saw her expression go from worried to sad. "I'm so sorry to hear that..I know you won't want to hear this or you'll think I'm insane but...I saw her in my mom's room three weeks ago..I switched her rooms because that freaked me out.." Francesca looked at him in hopes he would believe her..any sane person would say she was crazy and be on their way but he was different. "No..Your not insane..maybe she wants help" Hagan said while looking at Francesca seriously. "Help with what? finding her killer?" Francesca asked with a confused look on her face. "Yes" Hagen said, Francesca thought about it and then said "Alright..Ill help you.." Hagan took Francesca's phone and took a picture of himself and programed his number into her cell phone, He then smiled and walked away.

That night (3:00 A.m)

Franchesca felt cold and wet so she woke up out of her sleep and saw her room was filled with pure cold water. She looked around and then focused on the end of her bed, Her face turned to terror when she saw a hand slowly come out of the water and grab her bed frame, and slowly followed the head of a girl, The girl slowly climbed on the bed and worked her way to Francesca's face. "He killed me" The girl said in a very scary voice. Francesca's phone whipped open and opened Hagan's picture the screen cracked and froze on his picture. Francesca looked back and saw the girl and the water had all disappeared.

The next day at school.

Francesca avoided Hagan all day, Because of what happened last night she was way to scared to face him today. "Why are you avoiding me?" Hagan asked frustratedly. "Hagan..Did you kill her?" Francesca asked seriously "What? NO! Why would you even think something like that?" Hagan said with a laugh. "Yea..I guess your right..that was a pretty stupid question.." Francesca said weirdly. "Can I come over tonight?" Hagan asked "No..we are not unpacked yet its a total mess in that house.." Francesca said nervously. "Alright..Some other time then.." Hagan said while walking away, Francesca sighed with relief. She didn't trust him and she would find out the truth slowly.

Four months later.

"So can I come over tonight?" Hagen asked "Sure" Francesca said with a sweet smile. "Really no excuses?" Hagan asked in surprise "No not this time" Francesca said with a laugh. "Alright good..see you at eight." Hagan said as he nodded his head and walked away. "Got you right where I want you" Francesca said in a whisper.

Eight O'clock.

Knock Knock Knock.

Francesca opened the door and saw Hagan standing there on the front porch smiling "Hey" Hagan said handsomely. "Welcome..My mom is out on a date so she will not be back to ruin or barge in on our research about Riley." Francesca said. "Great..So have you seen her lately?" Hagan asked. Francesca passed by a mirror and for a split second she was Riley the dead girl "No" Francesca said with a grin. "Can I see your room?" Hagan asked with a smile "Yes" Francesca answered.

Francesca and Hagan entered the room and sat on Francesca's bed, Hagan slowly kissed Francesca and slowly layed her down. They made out for five minutes and Francesca rolled over on top of him. She reached down her thigh and pulled out a knife, She slowly raised her hand while she kissed him. She then stopped kissing him and lifted her head, Before he could open his eyes she quickly slashed his stomach four times.

"Aah! Ow! What the hell!?" Hagan yelled as he pushed Francesca to the floor. "You killed me Hagan..So ill repay you" Francesca said in a scary voice "Riley?" Hagan said in a frightened voice. "You killed me" Riley said as her face turned pale. "I didn't mean too!" Hagan jumped up and ran. Every door slammed shut, all but the bathroom. Hagan didn't think twice and ran into the bathroom and slammed the door shut and locked it. He saw the tub and jumped into it he instantly felt cold because to notice the pure cold water in it.

"I'm sorry! Please leave me alone! Riley I'm so sorry!" Hagan yelled and then closed his eyes and when he opened them he saw Riley's head coming out of the water. "Oh my god NO!" Hagan looked at his body when he felt sudden pain every where on his body and he saw his skin cutting open. He looked up and saw Riley's face in his and he screamed, She disappeared and then reappeared behind him pulling him under the water. He struggled but his life drained from his body and he fell limp taking his last breathe in which filled his lungs with water. Riley dragged him to Francesca's room and hid him under the bed, she then wrote a suicide note.


I am sorry but I just can't go on living after I killed Hagan, Never forget me mom. I love you,


Riley layed on the bed and slit Francesca's wrists she quickly left Francesca's body to make her feel all the pain. Francesca's mom came home and found the two bodies she called nine one one in terror. The cops left it as a murder suicide for that is what it looked like it was left a secret and the public never knew what truly happened. People still receive picture texts from Riley's phone and it frightens them so bad that they hurry up and send it to get it off of there screen.

Christina and her friends were walking down a street and were stopped by a scary looking girl. "I'm Riley could you point me the way to Henderson?" Riley asked. "Uh..Yes its one street over..that's where were going..." Christina and her friends said in scared voices. Riley walked down thestreet without saying another word to them and the girls decided to take the longer way to avoid this scary girl. Riley stopped in front of the house on the corner of Henderson she walked up to the porch and disappeared into the house. Christina showed her friends the outside of the house and they continued walking down the pathway. Christina glanced up to the bathroom and she saw a girl grinning in the window she closed her eyes and then opened them back up and saw that the girl was gone.

The End

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