I live in my own world... |
where everything is mine. |
Everything, Delicately I behold, |
fresh blowing wind & bright sunshine.. |
I wish you were there in my world |
Then it would have been full of love |
But you left me alone, before the life could unfold. |
I wonder were you ever true, when you said you are in love.. |
It doesn't matter, I am not sad |
Coz I don't need your presence, I can feel it |
I would never regret being with you, I know you were not bad.. |
I was complete with you & my world was bright |
What is expected out of me, What should I do?? |
Should I get along with my life and stop missing you? |
No it can't happen its not that easy.. |
You know I love you.. like crazy.. |
I see you along with me on my every step |
I hear your voice every moment & its yours I bet.. |
Ohh God!! |
I miss you and still love you.. |
Tell me what is this... |
Its nothing....... but love..!! |
Submitted: August 28, 2012
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Comments
beautiful and rings so true, i could relate to it, though i haven't broken up but we live miles apart, just hoping when i meet her she is the same like i left her .. keep writing :)
Wed, September 5th, 2012 11:20amI kinda feel this way right now... Its great how you've written this, it flows so well. KeepWriting =)
Fri, September 7th, 2012 9:09pmThe words, the feeling and the flow of words, everything is just perfect. Sort of personal poem but you wrote it in a very beautiful. I liked it very much, thanks for the reading invitation. I'll certainly go through the rest of your posted work.
Thu, September 13th, 2012 2:31amIt's good and I can relate to it, being, as I am in a LDR (long distance relationship) and that "feeling" is a big part of it. Well written and nice flow. :)
Fri, September 14th, 2012 8:03pmFacebook Comments
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i hate that feeling, as i have that "feeling" for a certian person...i guess i didnt know what i had until it was gone....really good write
Tue, August 28th, 2012 2:26pm