Nothing... but Love

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Poem by: GoodyBravo

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Status: Finished | Genre: Poetry | House: Booksie Classic

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This is a poetry written from an angle of a lover who has broken up with the partner and finds it difficult to move-on and love someone else.

Submitted: August 28, 2012

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Submitted: August 28, 2012

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I live in my own world...

where everything is mine.

Everything, Delicately I behold,

fresh blowing wind & bright sunshine..

I wish you were there in my world

Then it would have been full of love

But you left me alone, before the life could unfold.

I wonder were you ever true, when you said you are in love..

It doesn't matter, I am not sad

Coz I don't need your presence, I can feel it

I would never regret being with you, I know you were not bad..

I was complete with you & my world was bright

What is expected out of me, What should I do??

Should I get along with my life and stop missing you?

No it can't happen its not that easy..

You know I love you.. like crazy..

I see you along with me on my every step

I hear your voice every moment & its yours I bet..

Ohh God!!

I miss you and still love you..

Tell me what is this...

Its nothing....... but love..!!

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BlackMyst

Comment | 28 words

Tue, August 28th, 2012 7:26am

i hate that feeling, as i have that "feeling" for a certian person...i guess i didnt know what i had until it was gone....really good write

awaneesh1strivingbard

Comment | 36 words

Wed, September 5th, 2012 4:20am

beautiful and rings so true, i could relate to it, though i haven't broken up but we live miles apart, just hoping when i meet her she is the same like i left her .. keep writing :)

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Wed, September 5th, 2012 4:45am

thanks :) hope u meet her soon

iola ried

Comment | 18 words

Fri, September 7th, 2012 2:09pm

I kinda feel this way right now... Its great how you've written this, it flows so well. KeepWriting =)

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Comment | 21 words

Fri, September 7th, 2012 7:54pm

Thanks.. I hope you grow out of this.. Its not a good feeling..
Anyways, I am glad you liked the poem.

Vikrant

Comment | 45 words

Wed, September 12th, 2012 7:31pm

The words, the feeling and the flow of words, everything is just perfect. Sort of personal poem but you wrote it in a very beautiful. I liked it very much, thanks for the reading invitation. I'll certainly go through the rest of your posted work.

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Wed, September 12th, 2012 7:36pm

Hey Thanks Vikrant.. I am glad you liked it..

sleepingwithsirens

Comment | 32 words

Fri, September 14th, 2012 1:03pm

It's good and I can relate to it, being, as I am in a LDR (long distance relationship) and that "feeling" is a big part of it. Well written and nice flow. :)

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Sat, September 15th, 2012 11:05am

Wow I am glad you like it. Thanks