Nothing... but Love

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

This is a poetry written from an angle of a lover who has broken up with the partner and finds it difficult to move-on and love someone else.


I live in my own world...
  where everything is mine.
Everything, Delicately I behold,
 fresh blowing wind & bright sunshine..
I wish you were there in my world
  Then it would have been full of love
But you left me alone, before the life could unfold.
  I wonder were you ever true, when you said you are in love..
It doesn't matter, I am not sad
  Coz I don't need your presence, I can feel it
I would never regret being with you, I know you were not bad..
  I was complete with you & my world was bright
What is expected out of me, What should I do??
Should I get along with my life and stop missing you?
No it can't happen its not that easy..
You know I love you.. like crazy..
I see you along with me on my every step
I hear your voice every moment & its yours I bet..
Ohh God!!
I miss you and still love you..
Tell me what is this...
Its nothing....... but love..!!


Submitted: August 28, 2012

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i hate that feeling, as i have that "feeling" for a certian person...i guess i didnt know what i had until it was gone....really good write

Tue, August 28th, 2012 2:26pm

Awaneesh Shukla

beautiful and rings so true, i could relate to it, though i haven't broken up but we live miles apart, just hoping when i meet her she is the same like i left her .. keep writing :)

Wed, September 5th, 2012 11:20am


thanks :) hope u meet her soon

Wed, September 5th, 2012 4:45am

iola ried

I kinda feel this way right now... Its great how you've written this, it flows so well. KeepWriting =)

Fri, September 7th, 2012 9:09pm


Thanks.. I hope you grow out of this.. Its not a good feeling..
Anyways, I am glad you liked the poem.

Fri, September 7th, 2012 7:54pm


The words, the feeling and the flow of words, everything is just perfect. Sort of personal poem but you wrote it in a very beautiful. I liked it very much, thanks for the reading invitation. I'll certainly go through the rest of your posted work.

Thu, September 13th, 2012 2:31am


Hey Thanks Vikrant.. I am glad you liked it..

Wed, September 12th, 2012 7:36pm


It's good and I can relate to it, being, as I am in a LDR (long distance relationship) and that "feeling" is a big part of it. Well written and nice flow. :)

Fri, September 14th, 2012 8:03pm


Wow I am glad you like it. Thanks

Sat, September 15th, 2012 11:05am

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