This is a poem about a lonely suicidal girl.

Doom, despair, depression
The story of my life.
The pain, the suffering,
The never ending nightmare.
No one cares,
They don’t want to.
So alone and lost,
I’m sick of it.
Blood flows from my wrists,
My regret and betrayal.
So much hate, so much pain,
Why can’t I be free?
Sick of suffering
Can’t deal anymore
Just want it all to end.
Living life alone
Without a single friend.
So cold and alone,
Poor girl sat with a blade.
Covered in cuts,
Bleeding to death.
No more pain
Finally gotten what she wants.
She won’t be missed,
No one cares.
No one will notice that she’s gone
Except her love
Left alone
Singing his sad song

Submitted: April 01, 2009

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Great poem!!!
I loved the line
"Poor girl sat with a blade"
I think you right with such an intensity and honesty that anyone reading your poetry can't help but be pulled in and feel the emotion you put into it.

Tue, April 7th, 2009 1:32am


Thanks i don't know how I do it. i just feel an emotion and write purely on that emotion so i'm glad you like it.

Mon, April 13th, 2009 2:19am


Beautiful and dark poem ! Brill job ! keep up the good work !

Tue, April 7th, 2009 6:44pm


Thanks and I will keep writing. it keeps me sane

Mon, April 13th, 2009 2:21am


this poem pulled me in so eeply ur a great writer keep writing=)

Fri, April 10th, 2009 6:54pm


Thank you and I will.

Mon, April 13th, 2009 2:22am

Dark Skylight

Awh :( thats a great poem but sad,yeah..Im sure you have friends.If not,then comon,look you have friends in Booksie.And some people who dont understand how we feel or how you feel are not worth of mentioning. Loved your poem! :)

Sat, June 20th, 2009 6:51pm


Thanks I feel a lot better nowerdays (usually :() than I did when I wrote this poem :)=

Mon, June 22nd, 2009 12:27am


This poem is how i feel,thank you.

Thu, February 4th, 2010 7:27pm


No problem

Fri, February 5th, 2010 2:15am

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