This is about my relationship with my boyfriend and how he saved me.

His touch is like electric shocks,
His kisses seem to last an eternity.
He is the one who is always there for me.
The one I love and the one who loves me.
 
We can spend hours together and it feels like minutes,
No amount of time is ever enough.
We want each other,
Need each other so much.
 
We will be together for eternity
Although it seems as if we have already,
He’s the only thing I have in this cruel world,
The only thing keeping me alive.
 
Love conquers all
Love is the saviour at the end of the darkness.
It is all we need
To change our lives
Our minds
 
Love is all I need to save me


Submitted: May 04, 2009

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JenDamsel

yeah love can beat anybody's asses! great poem. with a beauty that only a person who have known real love could write about.
~Jenn

Wed, May 6th, 2009 9:09am

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I do know real love I have been in love with my boyfriend since we met a year and a half ago. We've been together for a year even though we've been through so much like my multiple suicide attempts. And I'm glad you liked the poem.

Wed, May 6th, 2009 6:16am

Anastasia Starlena

Wow a great poem I write alot of romance and mostly sappy but I loved the first line of this piece. It was different and seemed like a good way to describe a person's touch. Excellent.

Take Care,
Ana

Wed, May 6th, 2009 2:57pm

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Thanks I'm glad you liked it and I love your romance poems. Take care too Gothalicious

Thu, May 7th, 2009 3:48am

Rach Loves Sam

I like this one. I can relate to it aswell. Well done :] x

Wed, May 6th, 2009 6:00pm

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Thanks and I thought you would be able too :) x

Thu, May 7th, 2009 3:50am

Cherry Berry

This is a beautiful piece. Raw emotions, but deeply felt. You have expressed love well in this poem.

xox
Cherri

Wed, May 13th, 2009 3:33pm

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Thanks I generally write on pure emotion

Wed, May 13th, 2009 8:54am

Snow412

I'm glad you found him...or he you. If he hadn't, we wouldn't have this poem!

:) I enjoyed it, and I'm glad you shared!

Fri, May 29th, 2009 1:15am

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Tanks and I neither of us would be here if we hadn't found each other

Fri, May 29th, 2009 7:09am

Sunshine Raines

Wow I like this it is so sweet and so true. If everyone felt this way than Love would not have such a bad rep. more people would stay together and the world as a whole would be a happier place to live. S.R.

Sat, May 30th, 2009 8:26am

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Wouldn't it just and I'm glad you liked it

Tue, June 2nd, 2009 12:18am

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