Where the Angles Fly

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This is a poem I wrote for my girlfriend. She knows I write poetry all the time so I like to write her short love poems because I mean its one thing to get one off the internet but I think it means so much more to someone when you write them one from the heart. Enjoy...THX GOTHIKAH666 T_T

~ Where the Angels Fly ~

~ Until the day ~

~ I leave this place ~

~ I will forever cherish ~

~ Your beautiful face ~

~ And I hope and pray ~

~ That when I die ~

~ Ill see you in heaven ~

~ Where the angels fly ~

~ And we will be ~

~ Together once more ~

~ And we can forget ~

~ All the bad before ~

~ Ill hold you tight ~

~ And never let go ~

~ For the epic fight, ~

~ Is finnaly over ~

~ Its finally done ~

~ So let us live forever ~

~ And let me be your only one ~


Submitted: November 06, 2011

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availability

Thats really nice:)

Mon, November 7th, 2011 1:29am

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thx...fan me?

Sun, November 6th, 2011 5:38pm

AspiringWriter94

This is really good. I like the rhythm and flow it has. Keep it up. I'm already a fan so no need to ask.

Tue, November 8th, 2011 4:24am

nid

love this..

Tue, November 22nd, 2011 3:25am

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Thank you

Mon, November 21st, 2011 7:32pm

Sweet Dark Dream

I wish I could be an angel. Another great poem. I must say I really like your style Gothikah666. ^_^

Tue, November 22nd, 2011 5:40pm

samcc

This is a really good poem. Really shows your love :D

Tue, November 22nd, 2011 11:31pm

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Thank you...Fan me?

Tue, November 22nd, 2011 3:44pm

cheeky monkey

I LOVE IT!! I can totally relate to this well done :)

Wed, November 23rd, 2011 9:24am

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thanks...fan me?

Wed, November 23rd, 2011 6:54am

LightFeather09

EPIC :D I

Wed, November 23rd, 2011 4:11pm

Vidhya Biju

Very nice poem that shows the everlasting love....simple but great.....!

Sat, December 3rd, 2011 4:28pm

Livi Bear

Really nice :)

Fri, December 9th, 2011 2:09pm

hrit

Really awesome.. just a thought, dont add dying thought with ur live love.. wish you merry Christmas.. live long with ur love happily.. take care

Wed, December 21st, 2011 5:13pm

steven cooke

Beautiful in its simplicity. I like reading your work,
and you can find beauty in the dark, if you look.

Fri, February 24th, 2012 7:50pm

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so true :) fan me?

Fri, February 24th, 2012 2:49pm

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