Freezing Ice Hearts

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

it's winter the weather very cold but out love power inside can get the rainbow

the fog discover every where

and the cloud in the sky very larg

the rain until now i didn't hear

and the weather cold very much

Our heart is empty ...from love

and the weather make us feel not hot enough.......

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well hay ..... a few thing i would like

to say......it's not hot today

it's not what we hopped to be like yesterday

so hey....nothing will make us

feel save ........unless you love today

or you stay by yesterday

i want to love but my search isn't enough.....

i will get warm when i see the love in every where

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but here we are again

with the music playin'

everything is able to change

and every bad fly away

out in the storm and the cold place

inside at the dance and love air

nothing change.........i will still cold

unless the sun won't shining again

our heart is not able to steam....

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well hay ..... a few thing i would like

to say......it's not hot today

it's not what we hopped to be like yesterday

so hey....nothing will make us

feel save ........unless you love today

or you stay by yesterday

the cold make our hearts like ice cream freez.....

but i don't thing it's able to warm again it's freezing ice hearts

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we saw the rainbow at the sky

the sun shinning with different stars

the cold disapear and the warm appear

and there's no fog or cloud we dislike

when we love , the warm be in everywhere

our wishes come true since yesterday

and everybody happy and scream

like freezing ice hearts and steam

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well hay ..... a few thing i would like

to say......it's not hot today

it's not what we hopped to be like yesterday

so hey....nothing will make us

feel save ........unless you love today

or you stay by yesterday

i want to love but my search isn't enough.....

i will get warm when i see the love in every where

------------------------------------------------------------------

well hay ..... a few thing i would like

to say......it's not hot today

it's not what we hopped to be like yesterday

so hey....nothing will make us

feel save ........unless you love today

or you stay by yesterday

the cold make our hearts like ice cream freez.....

but i don't thing it's able to warm again it's freezing ice hearts

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Submitted: April 22, 2011

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RamonaWriter

Awwww, love it. Keep up the good work

Sat, April 23rd, 2011 6:02am

Thomas Mind

Hi Ronnie!

It is a very nice work. You do a pretty good job of creating a reader response through the use of the images you write about; this is important.

I was a bit lost in some of the grammar and word usage but the best thing took away from that. This was that you put yourself into it.

Did I recieve the right message? A heart is cold without love. But a heart can be cold also because of love?

Fri, May 13th, 2011 11:02am

Author
Reply

first thanks Thomas i'm horrible in grammar
second heart never be cold with love, love is warm like soft warm bed in stormy night

Fri, May 13th, 2011 4:52am

Darkie

Like I previously said besides the few spelling mistakes this poem is pretty good :D
Nice work and keep it up!
Click!:D

Fri, June 3rd, 2011 8:10pm

Author
Reply

ok i will try to do my best on the grammar mistakes

Sat, June 4th, 2011 8:59am

Euphoria

Love the outline and the shape of it! Great poem :)

Sun, August 28th, 2011 3:45pm

Author
Reply

Ohh thank you so much XD

Sun, August 28th, 2011 12:40pm

siirdarkmaz

nice.

Tue, August 30th, 2011 11:42am

Author
Reply

TY XD

Wed, August 31st, 2011 8:04am

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