True Victory

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

romance^Poem

(hook)

don't look in my soul deeper ,, cause i'm like the black ocean

don't look in my eyes deeper,,cause i will make you in revolution

don't open the lock heart ,, Deep you will see the true fascination

you apart of me that's not fantasy

i will be always here

that's the true Victory

................................

(verse1)

silently i'm walk into the dark jungle

where nobody's here and there no candles

taking my last breath

preparing to be unseen

Oh, until i saw a shining tree

No,i'm not gonna stay right here

................................

(hook)

don't look in my soul deeper ,, cause i'm like the black ocean

don't look in my eyes deeper,,cause i will make you in revolution

don't open the lock heart ,, Deep you will see the true fascination

you part of me that's not fantasy

i will be always here

that's the true Victory

..............................

(verse2)

looking into the fire burning in my eyes

nobody here to save me and i realized

i'm totally alone

None just came to complete my puzzle

since i born

and i've been waiting so along

Nobody's on

.............................

(hook)

don't look in my soul deeper ,, cause i'm like the black ocean

don't look in my eyes deeper,,cause i will make you in revolution

don't open the lock heart ,, Deep you will see the true fascination

you part of me that's not fantasy

i will be always here

that's the true Victory

..............................

(bridge)

the world will be in my pocket

i will be like the waves sweeping

i will destroy everyone

everyone deceiving

............................

(hook2)

don't look in my soul deeper ,, cause i'm like the black ocean

don't look in my eyes deeper,,cause i will make you in revolution

take my soul and fade away,,, after i burned into the fire

hold me and never let go ,,, i had too much from the liars

after that all i'm still in my place

at the pint of mt weakness

 


Submitted: October 07, 2011

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Christian Taylor

This is excellent! I love it!

Fri, October 7th, 2011 12:52am

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thank you XD really appreciate this first comment

Thu, October 6th, 2011 6:05pm

mdh7

Great! I really like it. It's well written.

Fri, October 7th, 2011 1:11am

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thank you XD

Fri, October 7th, 2011 10:08am

fresh spirits

Great poem with a lot of talent dear:)If you have time do check my poem Needless Love it is set for Ct comp.
Any way I did vote for this:)

Fri, October 7th, 2011 6:01am

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thank you so much and ofc i will check out yours

Fri, October 7th, 2011 10:08am

whiteroses

This is AMAZING!!! sooo amazing!!
very talented girl u are :D xxx

Fri, October 7th, 2011 6:45am

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Oh thanks i love you comment always i appreciate that word from you XDD

Fri, October 7th, 2011 10:07am

siirdarkmaz

nice job. Greatly written!!

Fri, October 7th, 2011 11:31am

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thank you XDD

Fri, October 7th, 2011 10:05am

Imagine Words

Amazing love the imagery :D

Sat, October 8th, 2011 11:42am

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thank you dear XDD

Sat, October 8th, 2011 10:49am

YaSoora

Very beautiful and honest!! I really liked the idea...
I would really appreciate it if you check out my poems.
good job!! keep up...

Thu, November 10th, 2011 5:33am

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ofc i will than you for this comment

Thu, November 10th, 2011 4:06am

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