Last Kiss

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

a boy breaks up with a girl but they share one last kiss together.

Last Kiss:

Last kiss,

There will never be

Another one

Tried to break up

Never could make up

Realized...



That they were never meant to be,

No matter how hard it seemed

Never Ending...

Last Kiss,

Let's make the most

of it.

Get really into it...

But now it's over.....

Felt completely

Alone..

No where to go.


Submitted: December 06, 2009

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Mistress of Word Play

Very nicely penned. Sad but true. Hearts break and that last kiss is what we remember. Lovely. Welcome to Booksie poet. Susan :)

Mon, December 14th, 2009 12:17am

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Thank you so much. By the way, Thank you for responding to my work and becoming a fan.

Wed, December 16th, 2009 6:31pm

livingproof

you should have made three stamina's, maybe one last little short one saying 'alone nowhere to go' so then you could have the good times together and the bad times together, like a pattern instead of just jumbled. good job otherwise, and true too, realistic makes it good.

Wed, December 23rd, 2009 2:11am

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thnx :D:)

Happy Holidays

Wed, December 23rd, 2009 3:57am

sweet cheeks

hmmm i liked it!! ... good way of putting it too! :)

Fri, April 1st, 2011 10:16pm

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