Leave Me Be,I'm Fine Enough Without You

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

a girl just wants to be left alone in life...

Leave Me Bee

Be

Leave me be,

I'm fine enough without you,

Leave me be,

I just want to have some...

peace and quiet...

For 1 single minute,

I don't have time to argue,

Just Leave Me Be...

LEAVE ME BE.


Submitted: December 05, 2009

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Mistress of Word Play

The repetition in your poem made this delightful. Love the crossed out Bee as well. Very good. Susan :)

Mon, December 14th, 2009 12:19am

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Thanks a lot. I really appreciate you commenting. Happy Holidays! :D :)

Wed, December 16th, 2009 6:29pm

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Nanna Marie Andersen

I know what this feels like - and you captured it well in your poem... If you ever feel like this, I think writing can strip away some of those emotions - I know it worked for me... :) I love this and I would love to become a fan... And that is simply because your writing is very similar to the work I made, when I was a couple of years younger... I can't wait to reading your next poem! :)

// Nanna ;)

Sat, January 2nd, 2010 1:49pm

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Thanx so much. Glad you liked it

:D:)

Fri, January 15th, 2010 3:53pm

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Grim Reaper 123

Thanks a lot. I really appreciate you commenting AND becoming a fan. You're right, writing helps a lot. Even though I am not having any problems right now, it's still a lot of fun to write according to emotions. \\ Grim Reaper 123

(but you can call me Helen) Hope you had a SAFE and Happy New Year

Sat, January 2nd, 2010 3:25pm

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