Roses from Uranus***

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Next time, your lover sends you flowers, look carefully, they may be roses from uranus...

Inspired by the dream last night, where i saw flowers growing on my whole body (gross hahah) and funnily it didnt seem weird at all, like it is normal to have flowers on you and i even picked a few most beautiful to gift to someone like he is sitting in the next room.. (hahah grossssss, cant hear more)

so the dream world is very very strange but here is the poem for you :)

 

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Roses from Uranus***

 

 

He looked at me in amazement

As if I have arrived from Uranus.

 

But what have I done

Just spoke from the depths of the turmoil

My heart has been caught in…

 

So, say love, will you accept these roses

They have bloomed for you… only for you,

See, how they bow down as if their existence is a crime,

Shaking and pleading in quiet excitement

That they are not guilty, ohhh they are innocent!

 

***In honor of Urania, prominent among the nine Muses..

 


Submitted: April 19, 2012

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LoneWolf93

Very nice poem. :) x

Thu, April 19th, 2012 7:48pm

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Thanks :)

Fri, April 20th, 2012 2:24am

SamiiGee

I thought it was a wonderful poem
I enjoyed it(:

Thu, April 19th, 2012 8:05pm

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Thank you :)

Fri, April 20th, 2012 2:23am

Soteria

I really liked this poem, very nice and eloquent

Thu, April 19th, 2012 8:30pm

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Thank you :)

Fri, April 20th, 2012 2:24am

Blackmirror

Very nicely written. Lovely and eloquent. :)

Thu, April 19th, 2012 8:49pm

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Thanks :)

Fri, April 20th, 2012 2:25am

InkSplodges

Very nice :)

Thu, April 19th, 2012 9:36pm

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:)

Fri, April 20th, 2012 2:26am

bluetiger26

Its good. I reall liked it

Thu, April 19th, 2012 11:58pm

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Thank you :)

Fri, April 20th, 2012 2:27am

I am Revera Love

You're Definatly topping my list of favorite poems right now :)

Fri, April 20th, 2012 12:12am

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Wow! Thats a compliment.. Thank you :)

Fri, April 20th, 2012 2:28am

LupusAmator

Ah, you are one of my favourite poets on Booksie :) I don't normally read poetry (it kind of bores me (-.-)) but for some reason yours don't! I love it!! KMU... again? :P

Fri, April 20th, 2012 12:30am

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Thanks... again, sure :)

Fri, April 20th, 2012 2:29am

incompletestory4296

I have the same opinion as LupusAmator
though I have to read yours twice before I understand it.
Don't worry it is definitely not you. I just have a hard time understanding poems and such.

Fri, April 20th, 2012 1:29am

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nah! this poem is also not as straightforward as it looks so i am glad you read it twice... Thank you :)

Fri, April 20th, 2012 2:30am

Courtney Fields

This is lovely, thank you for inviting me to read it. Maybe sometime you can read my first poem "Freedom at last" if you haven't already. Let me know when you write more poems/stories etc. :)

Fri, April 20th, 2012 6:37am

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Thank you... i'll read yours :)

Fri, April 20th, 2012 2:32am

Jimbobi

Hi Ruby, I didn't think your dream was gross at all (say the writer of PC). It strikes me that the person offering the rose's heart is in turmoil, causing the recipient to react strangely to the offering. But the flowers themselves and the intention is pure...another gem Ruby! Thanks for sharing!

Fri, April 20th, 2012 10:04am

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Thank you Jimmie :D

Yeah! it was a beautiful dream.. very beautiful, 2012 is the year of Venus afterall, havent you noticed the extraordinary profusion of flowers everywhere.This year all the notorious heart breakers will be made the victims of love, Great! Lets start with unsmiling, emotionless govt people.

No, the recipient is not behaving strangely, he is too amazed to react just like the giver of the flowers is speechlessly in turmoil.

i feel like a little girl who just met her superman...

Fri, April 20th, 2012 12:07pm

SPURIOUS

I like it. It's something different and interesting :) Great work and keep it up :D

Fri, April 20th, 2012 12:31pm

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Thank you :D

Fri, April 20th, 2012 12:09pm

Vampire17

Pretty cool poem! i would have checked it out sooner, but i had a track meet yesterday. Very sorry i couldn't have read it sooner. It was a great poem. Interesting dream...

Fri, April 20th, 2012 1:34pm

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Thanks.. i am glad you found time to read this :)

Fri, April 20th, 2012 12:11pm

youngwriter

Awww, I kind of find it sweet. :D haha nice write. :D

Fri, April 20th, 2012 2:34pm

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Awww.. Thanks :)

Fri, April 20th, 2012 12:12pm

Angel Garden

really good poem dude :)

Fri, April 20th, 2012 8:04pm

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Thank you... Dude,,

XD

Sat, April 21st, 2012 12:10am

inspiredbylove22

I love how such bizarre dreams can inspire wonderful words! Nice poem :)

Fri, April 20th, 2012 8:09pm

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Thank you :)

Sat, April 21st, 2012 12:11am

b l i s s

Really sweet ^.^

Fri, April 20th, 2012 8:26pm

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Thank you :)

Sat, April 21st, 2012 12:12am

Cavs1996

This is awesome(:

Fri, April 20th, 2012 10:48pm

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Thank you (:

Sat, April 21st, 2012 12:12am

Pharaoh888

Lovely poem! Sometimes dreams can treasure you with miracles, and sometimes they can terrorize you with frustration, it all comes down to you, as the dreamer.

So beautiful and eloquent! Way to write! ;)

Sat, April 21st, 2012 8:12am

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yeah, true... as i always say, i am blessed with beautiful dreams.

Thanks for the lovely comments :)

Sat, April 21st, 2012 4:23am

haniya99

Sh0rt nd nice~
bit philos0phic u r..~_^
had 2 read twice 2 undrstand a little:D

Sat, April 21st, 2012 9:11am

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i am glad you read it twice.. thank you :)

Sat, April 21st, 2012 4:25am

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