Soul of the Sonnet...

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

This is not a sonnet, this is 'soul of the sonnet'...

I am a bit sad these days, wish i had more time for writing and booksie...

 

 

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Soul of the sonnet..

 

When winds caress your skin like silken finger tips

Know, you were touched by the soul of the sonnet

Who came from the ambrosial gardens of Elysium

Looking for you, waiting for her thin veil to be lifted

In the presence of Divinity and no one else…

 

She trusts only in love but does love trust her!

She is a pure thought being embraced by yours

Trembling with joy in the warmth of acceptance,

And………………………………………………

In the glow of resurrection from the depths of Time…

 

My Heaven! Never abandon your angels again

Calm down the thunders and catch her in your echoes

And shelter her love, let your arms be her refuge

Oh! Don’t wait for miracles, the only miracle is you.. 

 


Submitted: June 16, 2012

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Passion123

I don't know why this poem put so much emotion in me...

Sat, June 16th, 2012 7:14pm

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ohhh! thanks...

Sun, June 17th, 2012 6:48am

jmurch

I am one to believe this more than most. I truly feel true art, music, and dance does carry a soul. It is the heart behind the beating. I love this piece. You never cease to amaze me!

Sat, June 16th, 2012 8:12pm

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"heart behind the beating" whoa, i love that phrase,,, yes i believe every piece of art is a living, throbbing thing that arrives with a soul and a destiny of its own :) Thanks for the deep understanding :)

Sun, June 17th, 2012 12:48am

inspiredbylove22

Simply lovely :-)

Sat, June 16th, 2012 8:17pm

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:)

Sun, June 17th, 2012 12:45am

Mike Stevens

Wow; beautiful!

Sat, June 16th, 2012 8:25pm

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:)

Sun, June 17th, 2012 12:44am

Julie March

I really enjoy poems that tell a story as well as convey emotion, so I loved this one. I think you've found what you're good at it, and it's poetry (but then again, I'm sure you knew that already.) :).

Sat, June 16th, 2012 11:06pm

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:) :) yeah, i sort of know, i love poetry... and mine tells a true story ;)

Sun, June 17th, 2012 12:42am

redskys

Beautifully written darling!I loved it!
~Lina

Sun, June 17th, 2012 12:07am

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:)

Sun, June 17th, 2012 12:39am

Izabee

Your imagery is quite lovely and word choice is brilliant(:

Sun, June 17th, 2012 12:14am

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:)

Sun, June 17th, 2012 12:38am

danielle12

Wow I loved this. It was so imaginative and I'm falling in love with your poems. I was pretty emotional when I read this and I'm not sure why...

Sun, June 17th, 2012 12:20am

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:) it is kind of complex... thank you :)

Sun, June 17th, 2012 12:37am

sharmaine1991

Brilliant. your poems get better and better as is thats possible when they are already so good. loved it

Sun, June 17th, 2012 12:40am

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Thank you :)

Sun, June 17th, 2012 12:36am

Audrey Wilson

awesome :] that's all I'm a gonna say

Sun, June 17th, 2012 2:19am

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:)

Sun, June 17th, 2012 6:46am

Livebecauseyoucan

I really liked it. You are fantastic at writing poems:)

Sun, June 17th, 2012 2:40am

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Thanks :)

Sun, June 17th, 2012 6:45am

MissDayDreamer15

I love it!! Keep writing! why? because i want more (^3^)/ !!!! This is simply brilliant, your brilliant :)))

Sun, June 17th, 2012 2:57am

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omg thanks :)

Sun, June 17th, 2012 6:44am

Soul_Dreamer

I love it, like all your other writing. keep it up :)

Sun, June 17th, 2012 3:10am

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Thank you :)

Sun, June 17th, 2012 6:43am

Stolentiara

Wow it's magnificent. Really touching I love all your poems!

Sun, June 17th, 2012 3:44am

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:) Thanks :)

Sun, June 17th, 2012 6:19am

chelly1979

I love the discriptive visuials. This is a beautiful poem, I always enjoy reading your poems, this one is no different. Its so full of emotion. Love it!

Sun, June 17th, 2012 4:07am

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Thank you :)

Sun, June 17th, 2012 6:50am

Julie March

Also, this poem made the "random first lines" feature, in case you weren't able to catch it. Thought I'd tell you.

Sun, June 17th, 2012 5:42am

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:) i didnt notice, thanks for informing :) :)

Sun, June 17th, 2012 6:53am

stonedwizardx6x

Loved it as always

Sun, June 17th, 2012 6:06am

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:)

Sun, June 17th, 2012 6:55am

Ian Dawn

the soul needs a helping hand and art is the true expression in any fascett

Sun, June 17th, 2012 10:17am

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sure, the soul needs embodiment as her expression.. thanks :)

Mon, June 18th, 2012 3:17am

Nunyahbizness

I loved it! It was really cool. ;)

Sun, June 17th, 2012 10:33am

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thanks :)

Mon, June 18th, 2012 3:16am

here-2-dream

I love your poems because of the language you use and they are always really ambiguous. You should really look at getting some published.

Sun, June 17th, 2012 10:45am

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Thank you,,, yes, this one is specially ambiguous.. publishing!!! been there in a nice way :) but i'll think about it :)

Mon, June 18th, 2012 3:15am

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