Whispering Love...

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Whenever the door opens by itself with a sudden jerk, i know it is you, you are thinking about me, you want to be with me... nah, wind cant turn the knob, only a storm can and that too at three different places, three different doors and so many times... why the doors open by themselves a while after i send you a message, even others look up to see who has come and then there is none to be seen... you are a miracle, a rare miracle...

For my dear, invisible Adonis...

 

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Whispering love…

 

Hello Enchanter!

Yester night I heard a beautiful, lilting voice

And as I turned to see, it was you

Glowing radiant like a rare miracle

And I felt as if Heaven smiled upon me…

While all the stars winked at each other

Conspiring happiness…

 

Now you know,

I am not great at hiding my feelings

Yes, my wandering mind always reaches out for you

But I break my silence only with a laughter

As if… it is all a joke and not this heart’s earnest desire..

 

Oh why! You are so sacred like a god to me

As I look at you, my heart begins to melt

Like a piece of candle thrown in the fire

That dares to caress the melding flames

Before being devoured forever…. 


Submitted: June 10, 2012

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stonedwizardx6x

Never disappointed when I come by here. Another great poem.

Sun, June 10th, 2012 7:19pm

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:)

Mon, June 11th, 2012 2:29am

PurpleDream19

This is beautiful :) Your words are so well chosen and they flow effortlessly. Amazing writing, you're really talented!

Sun, June 10th, 2012 7:43pm

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:)

Mon, June 11th, 2012 2:28am

Izabee

I really like this poem! It was very smooth and descriptive! Let me know if you write another poem, I would love to read it(:

Sun, June 10th, 2012 8:18pm

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thanks... sure :)

Mon, June 11th, 2012 2:28am

jmurch

...and he better be saying thank you too! You write so well! Your heart truly understands love!

Sun, June 10th, 2012 8:43pm

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nah,i wont accept thank you, love is the only valid currency in my universe ;)

you see i adore him, so i need to say thank you for all the great feelings and inspiration.

Thanks for coming by :) :)

Mon, June 11th, 2012 2:27am

Blackmirror

I love the way you phrase things. The wording is so mature and eloquent. Beautifully said. :)

Sun, June 10th, 2012 9:05pm

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:)

Mon, June 11th, 2012 2:23am

Soul_Dreamer

Aww I love it!
Your poems just keep getting better and better!
Keep it up :)

Sun, June 10th, 2012 9:16pm

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:)

Mon, June 11th, 2012 2:22am

Lasea

nice :)

Sun, June 10th, 2012 9:34pm

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:)

Mon, June 11th, 2012 2:22am

Stormbird Throneshaker

This ones a winner till you write the next one.
You have a way of taming those wild words.

Sun, June 10th, 2012 9:34pm

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yaaaay!!!

Mon, June 11th, 2012 2:22am

Mike Stevens

Once again, told with a beauty, elegance, and grace!

Sun, June 10th, 2012 10:37pm

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Thanks :)

Mon, June 11th, 2012 2:21am

Julie March

Oh, my goodness, it took my breath away, and I'm still trying to catch it! Isn't it amazing what we feel when we're in love?

Mon, June 11th, 2012 12:03am

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OhMG, it is the most beautiful feeling ever :) you need water?

lol, thanks :)

Mon, June 11th, 2012 2:20am

BayShark

This one is just amazing as the last! Your writing is very mature, not like some of the OTHER works I have read by writers I will leave unnamed...But really, this is very good! I like it a lot!

Mon, June 11th, 2012 12:13am

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Thank you :)

Mon, June 11th, 2012 2:18am

xoKenzieox

I love this. I honestly don't get how you're so amazing at this. And they just get better every time. Thank you for keeping me updated. :)


~Kenzie.

Mon, June 11th, 2012 1:59am

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when you are in love, you give your best, simple! Thank you, please keep visiting :)

Mon, June 11th, 2012 2:18am

Stolentiara

Lovely poem.

Mon, June 11th, 2012 2:25am

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:)

Mon, June 11th, 2012 2:16am

Antoine Watson I

The picture radiates a warm vibe very similar to the poem. I really like this poem. Its sweet, hearfelt, and as BayShark stated it is very mature. Poetry has to be your second language lol. Very nice.

Mon, June 11th, 2012 2:48am

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lol, its my first language :P

Mon, June 11th, 2012 2:16am

chelly1979

Wonderful. The use of language is superb. I can feel the emotion behind this. I love comming to this page, I always have a good read =)

Mon, June 11th, 2012 2:55am

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Please keep coming :)

Mon, June 11th, 2012 2:15am

Insane Membrane

nice job babe beautiful to read :-) and once again perfect pics

Mon, June 11th, 2012 2:57am

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Thanks ^_^

Mon, June 11th, 2012 2:14am

meenakshi sharma

all ur wrk is always awesome .. and this is also vry nice nd good wrk. keep oon writing. :)

Mon, June 11th, 2012 5:10am

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:)

Mon, June 11th, 2012 2:12am

simplyema

another excellent poem!!

Mon, June 11th, 2012 6:02am

MissDayDreamer15

It's Simply beautiful, i love it :)

Mon, June 11th, 2012 7:57am

Pharaoh888

A poem embraced by a burning passion, the picture really helped bring it to life. Not only do I like your choice of words, but your choice of pictures as well. A very compelling love poem. Simply Beautiful ^_^

Mon, June 11th, 2012 8:26am

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Thank you Pharaoh :)

Mon, June 11th, 2012 2:49am

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