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A poem with an ending.

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Submitted: October 07, 2011

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Submitted: October 07, 2011

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LIKE WHITE PETALS


BY H.F

 

 

A  journey comes to an end as I emerge from the wild trails
Into a novel space, before me an exquisite landscape
Such landscape I must not refer to a setting of a kind
But a landscape...of a woman of exquisite essence
The essence of purity and beauty
It has caught my eyes, and I freeze while staring
After such hardship from my journey, I feel everything was worth it
Everything was of necessity for me to witness this landscape
Perhaps she is like a garden...of a rose
Oh, such beauty!

Her essence blossoms every second of time, a never-ending phenomenon
She is phenomenal, as she stands in the air from the tree
In the light from the sun
The wind blows her, washing what comes out of her...beauty
Yes, as it is necessary 'cause she is too beautiful
She swirls with freedom, no negativity from the outside to stop her
The ominous small animals suddenly move away from her
They fear her intelligence. No doubt she is intelligent
Weak yet consistent, even in the moments of strong wind
That is trying to drag her but couldn't
Her smile appears to be equal...to the love
By a number of the livings that hold such
No wonder the space's fauna and flora are so attracted to her
Perhaps she is the universal rose
Her beauty and essence and intelligence showing at every angle
When she turns, when she looks
They keep growing around her, like white petals of a rose

I must approach the landscape any minute now
No...I must wait. Or I must rest before getting few steps closer
Oh, her beauty! Such is overwhelming
I must retrace my steps to the wild trails
To endure more experience
To be ready for her
Perhaps it is impossible now, as I freeze by the landscape
I just wait, and wait, and wait
For determination to approach her
I just freeze in place
Maybe I shall freeze for eternity. Yes, I am willing to wait
While watching her beauty
She is now the fuel to my existence
Ah! Such a wonderful ending for my journey!


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