Why?

its pretty good. :) you should join my publishing house.

amazing piece of writing - well done

The imagery is stunning! I quite enjoyed it.

I like this. I also enjoyed the use of the word "maliferous." I feel like I can relate sort of on a personal level to this poem, as I'm sure a lot of people can. I really enjoyed this! I'm going to look for more of your writings, I can't wait! Great poem

This was nice. Now I'm no good at interpreting poetry, I just kind of recently got into the whole world of it like less than a month or maybe a month ago I can't remember lol :) I'm rambling so....

I was trying to figure out exactly what the anarrator was going through. My mind was constructing this entire story for her in so many different scenario's that it excited it a bit reading it. I read through it at least 3 times I think. First I thought maybe she was being berated by a mother, or a family member. Like someone she trusted was destroying her inside and out and as the poem came to an end either the pain became so severe but she just could not find a way out because this person was her family, because they were always there and so she just ended up asking why. Or the abuse finally became physical.

After that I though maybe she was hurting herself, like the secondary person was not another person at all but maybe a personification of self loathing and hatred who the narrator really was and what she thought about her own image and what she thought about the fact that she hated herself.

I don't know why but my mind was raving when I read this. It was so much fun to read.

Thank you for the request.

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Kossettes.

Wow. Just wow ????

Being forced to be what you are not by parental or friends expectations -- am I right here! And being put down, at least verbally, when you either can't or won't fit the mold....There are some brilliant lines here, too many to mention. So easy for me to relate to, and it's heading for my shelf!

Good obviously i used an emoji the website turned it to bunch of question marks

Aside from your impressive way with words, this is a very touching piece of poetry. Your ability to leave a reader without any option but to feel the emotion behind your written work is a great quality to have as a writer. Well done.

I like it! What was the inspiration behind it??

Very deep. Excellent adjective use! Please check out some of my work and tell me what you think!

There is an abnormal instinct in a way someone ask why you did this to me. You ask all the time our narrator in this story gives space for living a life of hatred without the worth to care each other. It is said that there is a value dropped for its unusual conventions. I dont know where the whole stuff ends expect in desperate fulfillment of lust. May be the character here need to know what is love and ask why not now. To giveaway this feeling do not ask a heart why me as the episode chase an unworthy feeling of abuse all that must end for a betterment. I feel your next poem must illustrate how someone will come out of all such experiences. :)

Ohh Wowww marvelous ....

good. very descriptive. no suspense really, just pain. Dramatic and interesting read. good job

That is such a trippy poem. So terrible how she treated him.