A girl who is judged

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Its about a girl who is being judged

A girl who has been judged.

By: Hailey White

January 13,2012

 

A girl walks down the hallway.

People judge her.

She has cuts and burns all up her forearms.

She wears a hoodie to cover up the scars.

People judge this girl at school.

They don’t what she is battling in her everyday life.

So who are they to judge her?

If they want to judge somebody they should look in the mirror.

She goes home and isolates herself everyday in her room.

Her family asks her what is wrong and she lies to them and says nothing.

When people judge her because, she dresses differently from them, she doesn’t really fit in, and she is very quiet because, she is very shy.

Finally one day she finally speaks out in class and people look at her in shock because, it was her first time talking in along time.

Ever since then she has been more open with her opinions and thoughts.

She doesn’t go home and lie to her family any more.


Submitted: January 18, 2012

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Trevor Lee Weathers

have you been judged Hailey? if you have i am here for you. you put a lot of filling into the poem and i enjoyed reading it because it sounds real it doesn't sound fake keep up the good work *pushes the like button*

Wed, January 18th, 2012 8:54pm

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yeah I have been judged

Wed, January 18th, 2012 12:58pm

emo mexican needs love too

awwww i am sorry sweet heart you should have never been judged i hate people who are like that *hugs you* we are here for you Hailey.

Wed, January 18th, 2012 9:02pm

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thanks and *hugs you* back. i am single if u r wondering

Wed, January 18th, 2012 1:04pm

Brian W

A good write...You have emotion in this and a good message....I am sure many can relate to this.....the flow of the poem is jumpy but nothing major....Keep writing

Wed, January 18th, 2012 9:36pm

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kk i will

Thu, January 19th, 2012 6:40am

animilia

I'm sorry you;ve been judged:( This is a nice poem, you should write more(:

Wed, January 18th, 2012 10:16pm

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i will write more

Thu, January 19th, 2012 6:40am

haters are not welcome to chat with me

this should no have happened to you i strongly believe you should be treated like royalty and be treated like a queen *hugs you* but great poem.

Thu, January 19th, 2012 12:18am

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thanks alot

Thu, January 19th, 2012 6:39am

emos are lovable too in memory of Will Norton

this made me cry you should have never ever ever gotten bullied or judged me and my best friends are here for you Hailey hang in there be strong we will help you pull through this just remember if someone insults you remember your better than them hands down and they are just jealous of your looks and beauty and how sweet you are don't let there words upset you or get to you.

Thu, January 19th, 2012 12:29am

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thanks

Thu, January 19th, 2012 6:39am

thinking of blood on the dance floor

i swear you are more smarter to deal with wanna bee bullies like them don't let them ruin your self-esteem and you will go far.

Thu, January 19th, 2012 12:32am

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thank yoi

Thu, January 19th, 2012 6:38am

luvbug1

this is a very sad poem i almost started to cry

Thu, January 19th, 2012 2:51am

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sorry about that

Thu, January 19th, 2012 6:37am

the name is Sam and who cares if i am a bad boy

this poem reminds me a lot about mine and my best friends life except i am a boy that is the only thing different between you and me but i find this rather sad knowing your dealing with this to i am sorry Hailey.

Thu, January 19th, 2012 3:26am

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i used to but i started speaking up for myself

Thu, January 19th, 2012 6:37am

is it ok to break the rules when it comes from me

this poem was full of emotion and it made me cry knowing this happens to you but no ones perfect sadly i get bullied a lot.

Thu, January 19th, 2012 3:31am

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i used to until i started speaking up

Thu, January 19th, 2012 6:36am

i am trying to live life to its fulliest

this upsets me deeply your a beautiful young girl who they judge for no reason they have some issues that need worked on -_- anyways be strong and i will be glad to chat with you once i come online but remain strong and i am sure those people will realize they are not getting to you and they end up leaving you alone.

Thu, January 19th, 2012 3:36am

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thanks

Thu, January 19th, 2012 6:35am

i am who i choose to be by being myself

i am sorry Hailey this happens to you there people who are this mean to you are really really low don't let them get to you i will talk to you once i get back online stay strong.

Thu, January 19th, 2012 3:39am

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who is this

Thu, January 19th, 2012 6:35am

Brennan is so sweet

who judges you sis? i a rather angry they are doing that to you -_- be strong Hailey just try to avoid the problem.

Thu, January 19th, 2012 3:42am

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it was last year

Thu, January 19th, 2012 6:33am

i love wild life

i am sorry this happened to you princess i hope we will all overcome this judging and bullying problem fast this should have never happened and you should not have been judged your letting the real world know who you are don't let anyone lower your self-esteem me and my best friends are here for you.

Thu, January 19th, 2012 3:48am

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thanks

Thu, January 19th, 2012 6:34am

is love crime when it comes to loving you

this is just wrong i am 100% gay and this just makes me mad you don't diserve to be judged or bullied i heard wonderful things about your from Kristen so i know this should never happen to you stay strong.

Thu, January 19th, 2012 4:04am

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thanks

Thu, January 19th, 2012 6:32am

i love wild life

i did comment on this Hailey O_O ...

Thu, January 19th, 2012 6:38pm

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not this one the one after what bitch means

Thu, January 19th, 2012 10:42am

CourtneyBeachGirl

THis is really good and perfect about the truth behind your life great job keep writing

Thu, January 19th, 2012 9:59pm

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thanks

Fri, January 20th, 2012 6:31am

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