Ya know, that good old universe an all!

Once upon a time
  there was the end of time
And that's when things
really eternally began
Destinies plan
hadn't been mapped
And god hadn't
 tied his own hands

Submitted: August 01, 2007

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Ever optimistic

Wed, August 1st, 2007 11:40pm


Ya know .. Is the glass half empty or is it half full ..or is it tiny fragments and splatters scattered across the floor ?

Thu, August 2nd, 2007 5:52am


sometimes lately I wonder if we don't tie our own hands, thinking to wait on fate and destiny rather than creating our own. sometimes it's easier for me to let the world choose although I know I can create myself as well. great writing, I love anything to do with time, your poems are always thought provoking, thanks--hope all is well--:)

Fri, August 3rd, 2007 4:46pm


I agree with your wondering ... although .. Magic has taught that when one does not really know.Then the universe will always provide an answer .. we may bury our heads in the sand in fear of what that answer may be ..In all my realities its when I let go things move .. when i try and control the space I am in ..it all goes pear shaped .
Embacing life with arms open full is hard .. but I trust that life gave me my being for a reason .. I trust it won't let me down ..and in all honesty it never has .. only I have let myself down from time to time refusing to believe in my own creative process .. wether thats making a cup of tea or designing a book cover .!
thanks for you lovely comment.. may the universe shower you with its marvelous gifts

Mon, August 6th, 2007 2:48am

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