Stale breath

Poem by: half chewed pen

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as the vapour evaporates and the view becomes clearer.

Breath drawn

Upon the moments of hesitation

In Panes of refinement

and periods of gestation.

Hold the hand of fortune

let it guide you to the gold

towards the fountain of pleasure

for each their equal measure

where even the sands of time Indulge.

Submitted: June 06, 2007

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Mika

Very deep, wonderfully moving.

Thu, June 7th, 2007 7:34am

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Thank you very much for your kind words!

Fri, June 8th, 2007 7:15pm

anouklovett

Great word choice for the end. Any word other than indulge might have crushed this work.

Sun, February 3rd, 2008 8:09am

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Thank you. Where would we be without Indulgence?

Sun, February 3rd, 2008 5:25am

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