The Pea

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Do you eat every last pea on your plate?

The pea

I'll eat every last pea,

You just watch me!

He-he-he-he!

Quick!

Hide them where no-one can see!

Whoops, left three!

 


Submitted: February 03, 2008

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cris x

haha. again, cute. but the last line, if you dont mind me saying, doesnt really flow very well. you could add an "accidentally" after the whoops and i think it would flow better, but at the end of the day, you're the writer and i'm just the reviewer.

Sun, February 3rd, 2008 8:15pm

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Ham says thanks for the advise.I'll think bout what you said.

Sun, February 3rd, 2008 2:00pm

Jbortti

Nice ! Funny! Great!

Mon, February 4th, 2008 12:09am

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Thanks! Cheers! Bye!! Ham.

Thu, February 7th, 2008 4:31pm

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