my sweet roisin dubh (i guess its a work in progress)

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Non-Fiction  |  House: Booksie Classic

its a song in progress. if anyone wants to give me constructive criticism it would be greatly appreciated

Its been three long years today
since I sold your love away
to the ends of the earth id go
for you my sweet roisin dubh

you were the rose in the window sill
staring at the world below
my life stood practically still
guess that's why you had to go
you said it was for the best
I just let you leave
now my heart wont let me rest
its time I make my reprive


I left on a search for fiddlers green
put the wrong foot forward, I slipped and I fell
maybe this is all a bad dream
cause I tripped into this living hell
I searched for something id never find
when all I ever wanted was you
I thought I could get my peace of mind
will you forgive me my sweet roisin dubh


Submitted: April 13, 2009

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