Move with Me!

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Other  |  House: Booksie Classic

The headache that started hammering in my head was pounding to the beat of the song.

 

  The headache that started hammering in my head was pounding to the beat of the song, my feet were lifting me off of the ground and setting me back upon it once more. My eyes were shut, blocking out the bright flashing lights. My arms came in contact with others bodies, and everytime I knew that it was going to leave a bruise. A small peice of proof of the night. My lips were stretched into a smile.

The music was fast and loud and addictive. The beat seemed to grasp everyone it its arms and keep them there. Making it almost impossible to stop moving to it. To stop dancing. But for a mere second, my eyes opened as I downed the last of the can of coke in my hand. I was greeted by bright lights and people jumping around. The can slid from my grasp and hit the floor as a whisper floated into my ear.

 

" Move with me..." The room started spinning around me, and once again I shut my eyes and retreated back into the darkness. So we moved together. Danced together. Our hands intertwined with one anothers. Sweaty palms pressed together. We didn't talk. We didn't need to. 

As the song ended, I oepned my eyes as if I had been in a trance. I turned and made an attempt out of the crowd. After my obsticale of people, my lungs were filled with what seemed like the freshes air I had ever breathed. My breaths were slow and heavy. My headache had spread to my temples. Then... the framiliar beat of "Pretty Little Rave Girl" floated in my ears and I took one last breath before dunking down into the crowd once more. Hoping to move with him again.


Submitted: August 27, 2009

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Candy Rock

nice, short, and sweet. it really has rhythm and i enjoyed reading it.

Thu, August 27th, 2009 10:54pm

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Thanks Candy : D

Fri, August 28th, 2009 12:27pm

emilymckenzie

I really enjoyed reading it.
I love it.
I want to read more of your stuff now

Sun, August 30th, 2009 7:04pm

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Aaaaah! Thank you so much emily

Sun, August 30th, 2009 12:32pm

Phoenix Personiam

I already said this but I really hope you know that you write with amazing detial, like its crazy! I can truly picture whats going on

Fri, November 27th, 2009 12:57am

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Awh thank you so much!!! Love your comments

Fri, November 27th, 2009 12:08am

aliciab1804

Short and sweet! Very nicely done and eh I guess music has this kind of effect on everyone ;) Thanks for sharing!

Mon, February 7th, 2011 1:05pm

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