Light in a Dark World

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

When you walking through a tunnel and you see the light at the end you automatically feel more confident.

Ages have been spent in darkness

happiness covered by worlds starkness

how long until I don't have to feel to see

how long until this world can go on gleefully

I see the light at the end growing strong,

but all I can think is how long?

I see daybreak coming in

maybe this world could be cleansed of sin

all I know is there will be a day either close

or far away


Submitted: January 01, 2013

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Maddie Patrick

Liked this one because of the rhyming and the wording that you used. It flowed really nicely and it took you away to a different world. Where you imagined everything beautifully. Great job.

Tue, January 1st, 2013 5:47pm

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Thanks Girl

Tue, January 1st, 2013 10:21am

Matthew D. Hay (Tangible Word)

This was amazing :D Love your word choice and the flow of this :D

Fri, January 25th, 2013 10:39pm

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I really appreciate the complement, you do too.

Sat, April 27th, 2013 8:09pm

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