Can't Escape Fate

Runner-up-Booksie Spring 2017 Flash Fiction Contest Runner-up-Booksie Spring 2017 Flash Fiction Contest

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Science Fiction  |  House: Booksie Classic

Flash Fiction 2017

The aroma of freshly brewed coffee permeated the air. Sunlight filtered in from the glass pane windows, revealing blonde highlights in her dark hair. Everyday, her immutable routine would be to wake up, go to class, and come to the coffee shop a few blocks away from campus to calm her frazzled nerves. Today was no different. Until she saw him.

His dark hair was cropped short and he was carrying a backpack. So he was a student like herself. There was nothing particularly striking about him, he was very nondescript in character but little did she know he was going to change her life forever.

At first everything was mundane, almost monotonous, but within the next frame she saw bullets rip through his chest, his crimson blood drenching his thin, grey t-shirt. His body hit the floor before she could fully comprehend what had just happened. Screams tore at her ear drums as people raced to the door, in a frenzy, to escape the killer amongst the crowd. She was next.

Gasping, her eyes flew open. She looked around the coffee shop. No blood. No screams. Everything was normal. But she knew it wasn’t going to be for long.

 


Submitted: July 02, 2017

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Rubie Phoenix

I found this brilliant :) it made me want to read even more about this girl :)

Sat, October 20th, 2018 5:33am

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Forrest Obzerveer

That's neat setting up your protagonist to make the difficult choice of intervening somehow or getting her butt out of there. Or at least, that's what see as the next thing to enter the character's mind. Nice one!

Sun, June 9th, 2019 5:45pm

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