the innocent soul

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

its a poem about the grim reaper trying to take an innocent soul.

Death its not my soul you'll take,

when i dream and when i wake.

I'm much too real and so not fake,

i can promise you I will Not Break.

I know i made a serious mistake,

i know i hurt my true love jake,

but i really inspired my huge fan drake.

thanks to me his dreams are bake.

so do you really think its my time to handbrake?


Submitted: April 30, 2009

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Sixbells

Good start, it would be nice to see this expanded.

Thu, April 30th, 2009 7:15pm

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thank you for showing some support to me and my poems. i took your advice and continued the poem. check it out and let me know if you like it . thank you for your time

Thu, April 30th, 2009 12:40pm

angelmona

i lovrd it!!!!!!^_^ mona

Fri, May 1st, 2009 12:43am

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hello there =] thanks for showing some support! it means a lot to me. thank you !

Thu, April 30th, 2009 6:36pm

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