Two Teardropz

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Mystery and Crime  |  House: Booksie Classic
A kidnap of Holly causes a big caotic argument in the family and the forget about her kidnap meanwhile Holly has a teardrop roll down her face but will she only have chance to have 2?

Submitted: March 20, 2009

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On the day of Holly's kidnap tears rolled down people's faces like they were chasing eachother and sadness spread across the nation like a contageous disease. Holly was last seen in the back of a lorry on Duncan Street and the driver's face was covered by a balaclava. It rained and the drops swam in Holly's mouth as she had one last scream before the doors slammed shut! 4 years later, Holly woke up one morning in the cellar that she had been kept in and saw her food which was pushed under a gap through the bottom of the door. It was bread and vinegar. To Holly this was a good meal as she would normally get a bowl of milk! She looked through a hole in the wall and the "KIDNAPPED HOLLY" signs were being took down and the men were muttering there's no point now the family has probably forgotton about her now there is no use the police searching for anymore! For the first time in 4 years a tear rolled down Holly's face. She picked up the piece of wet bread and through it at the door. "LET ME OUT!" she screamed through the hole however the men failed to hear and continued to walk on and take off the posters from the lamposts. Another tear filled up her eye and she tried to squeeze it out and as it rolled down her face she let one last scream fly out of the hole. The men turned round and saw the eye in the wall. "Hello?" they asked. "Its me,Holly," she replied. "Great Happiness!" they applauded "How will we get you out of there though?" asked the men looking inconfident. "I know!" she replied. "Just go with the flow!" she continued.

Holly walked over to the door and kicked at it. There were marks where she had once hit it and as the door got weaker she gave one last quick and as a consequence the door collapsed. "YOU!" shouted the man who was lying on a sofa outside the room. Holly dashed down the corridor with her heart pounding. A scary face with blood running from its mouth popped around the wall and 3 dead and scary clowns were heading her way. They were the earlier victims of the old man. Holly screamed. They ran around her and went for the old man. He aimed his gun at Holly to make one last kill but before he could he got hit by the clowns and the face and Holly escaped from an open door which was unlocked by the two men. Holly dashed through the door leaving the old man in pain and death. The men took her to the Station. Holly was in a terrible state. Without another tear she returned home and was reunited with her loving family and from that day on she never cried and she just remebered her last two teardropz.


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