Time has told me

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Fantasy  |  House: Booksie Classic

Thoughts about time and life....

...And time has told me,
to never regret my crimes,
they are my only trophies
they are my only chimes...

In the windmills of my mind
the time stopped, it stood still,
time spoke of winds, and of sins,
of mist and fog, in my eyes they grin...still

they howl an old and ancient song,
come, let's dance on the edge of the unknown
take my hand, let me rescue your shipwreck
the sand is screaming for release,

time has told me,
to forgive my sins, and never forget,
seasons pass...days end, hearts hurt,
and love dies ...

he was once a stranger in my life
now he is alive in my weird days...
time, a lover consuming his ways
through the wrinkles on my face
an invisible lace...a hasty pace
throwing me off course...
into the swirling tides ...
of words.... ink....and blanks to fill...



Submitted: December 01, 2009

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Phoenix1

Absolutely beautiful! Brilliant! I love it. Wow

Tue, December 1st, 2009 3:46pm

Desiree Addams

Love it! Totally awesome. Really felt this one. I can relate. You have a gift for prose.

Time has told me much the same, except the fog is more in my mind now because I'm close the the half century mark. Will be 48 Feb 10th.

I totally love this: time has told me,
to forgive my sins, and never forget,
seasons pass...days end, hearts hurt,
and love dies ...

he was once a stranger in my life
now he is alive in my weird days...

So awesome! Very well put.

Look forward to more.

d

Thu, January 28th, 2010 1:39am

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Desiree,
Thank you so very much for taking the time to read what I posted, I know you are busy writing, and I thank God for giving you the inspiration to write such beautiful stories!!
I thank you for existing, writing, and being the awesome author that you are, you really do write brilliantly and I am looking forward for the next chapters of "The Eyes of the Stranger: Her Master's Pleasure"...pls posy soon...I am dying to read about "the other" Coming to see Desiree...I am totally under the spell.

I want to wish You a VERY Happy Birthday, I know it is a bit early, but you know we could make everyday a birthday, by learning new things and being hopeful, age has nothing to do with life, it is our heart :)

As long as we feel young inside, time will tell us to live and capture life's flavors and color pallets and whims and twists and tame them into a beautiful painting to share with the world, just like you are doing by writing :)

I am honored that you read my humble writing and related to it, was trying to post, but many times I had technical difficulties and just gave up on doing so...Ir was frustrating to try to post time and again ...

I read ALL of your writings, one by one, I did not comment for I was really awed and speechless especially by your poem
"Chains and Black Leather" Oh MY GOD !!
I was there instead of her, this much I could say, and I am sure you understand how deeply I related :)

Again THANK YOU For being who you are, for you are a gifted Woman who shares wonderful moments with her readers.
My Sincere respect and regards to you My Lady!

PS.As I said, read all of your writing avidly,did not comment much, but I always voted you, I have your page bookmarked :) Don't wanna miss on anything!

Thu, January 28th, 2010 7:42am

DonsFantasy

Time can say a lot and you've illustrated this beautifully!

Wed, February 3rd, 2010 2:54pm

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Thank you :)

Wed, February 3rd, 2010 7:59am

Arilove

Wow!! Im speechless. This is so beautiful. Amazingly written. I re read it like twice. U are so talented. Im definitely keeping this in my reading list

Fri, March 5th, 2010 6:16am

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AWW I am so grateful for your time and comments, and honored that a talented writer such as yourself is liking my humble words.
THANK You so much :)

Fri, March 5th, 2010 6:15am

sweet angel

nice one friend!
lol....u r amazin'!:)

Tue, July 6th, 2010 8:03am

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Thanks Sweet Angel :)

Wed, July 7th, 2010 12:47am

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