Favour or Grace

Poem by: Henry Captor

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This is a poem that I wrote and given to Hannah! :)

To see, to hear

to live, to die

but...where may I

lay down upon those dashing eyes

Could I create myself anew

I would not fail in pleasing you

I see that with our friendship

is so much joy

but...can we take the next steps

I see that you are the one and only you

and that I am the one and only me

but can we be..."We are the ones and only as"

when I look at your eyes

I see heaven

When your hair is blown by the warm breezy wind

I hear it whisper

and your beautiful soft skin reminds me of the snows

that makes my eyes wide and big

I ask you...to show one last significant

cause your heart is my song

with your beautiful smile, laughs, and your sense of resourcefulness

I can hear your heart beat now...

slowing down...

one by one...

( I Love You Hannah) :)

Submitted: August 21, 2013

Poetry love friendship joy song relationship snow heaven grace heat beat hannah significant resourcefulness favour

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AbstractKash

Aww It's so cute and sweet :) It looks like you've written this for your girlfriend. She must be very lucky :) I loved the flow of this poem and the emotions you've so beautifully written. Great Work!!! would like to read more from you~

Wed, August 21st, 2013 7:09am

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Haha Thanks! :D
And...yes Hannah is my girlfriend and I love her so much in my heart! :) And I'll try to keep you posted, anyway thank you so much Abstractkash! xD