Dear Cat

Poem by: HiKitty

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It is pretty much a self explanatory couplet.
2 lines

You would look better, my dear cat

If that truck hadn't squashed you flat

Submitted: November 01, 2012

Humor cat truck

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RBSLB

Inspired me to keep my cats inside :)

Thu, November 1st, 2012 5:36pm

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hahaha :)smart choice

Fri, November 2nd, 2012 2:24am

K Alyson

Fri, November 2nd, 2012 6:37am

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Wed, January 2nd, 2013 1:52am

brucek

thanks for fanning me. did you read my stuff? have any opinions or comments to offer? i thought this was cute. so short, so i think it was important to choose your words carefully. that's why i loved your use of the word dear. detached, but with affection, a difficult combination to pull off.

Thu, November 8th, 2012 2:44pm

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You are very welcome. I did read some of your work. I particularly enjoyed the nursery rhymes with footnotes. Very clever and funny :) not like me though (I'm joking, I do have a very stupid sense of humor)
I am glad you found this cute, even though it is about a cat being run over..nevertheless, I like to keep things short and simple, otherwise I will become confused in the tiny little noggin of mine.
I wrote this poem in a year 6 poem night because I didn't want to waste my time on a long boring piece. It was funny because the day before the poem night, my friends cat actually got run over and I didn't know.
I am glad that you liked my poem, and I'm sorry that I am babbling on a bit too much here..babble babble babble...
thank you for commenting! I hardly ever get any, which is very disappointing for me:( But I did today, so thank you very very very much!
I'm sorry, I'm not really choosing my words very carefully now...

Fri, November 9th, 2012 1:46am