Poem by: HiKitty
Submitted: November 01, 2012
You would look better, my dear cat
If that truck hadn't squashed you flat
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Inspired me to keep my cats inside :)
hahaha :)smart choice
thanks for fanning me. did you read my stuff? have any opinions or comments to offer? i thought this was cute. so short, so i think it was important to choose your words carefully. that's why i loved your use of the word dear. detached, but with affection, a difficult combination to pull off.
You are very welcome. I did read some of your work. I particularly enjoyed the nursery rhymes with footnotes. Very clever and funny :) not like me though (I'm joking, I do have a very stupid sense of humor)
I am glad you found this cute, even though it is about a cat being run over..nevertheless, I like to keep things short and simple, otherwise I will become confused in the tiny little noggin of mine.
I wrote this poem in a year 6 poem night because I didn't want to waste my time on a long boring piece. It was funny because the day before the poem night, my friends cat actually got run over and I didn't know.
I am glad that you liked my poem, and I'm sorry that I am babbling on a bit too much here..babble babble babble...
thank you for commenting! I hardly ever get any, which is very disappointing for me:( But I did today, so thank you very very very much!
I'm sorry, I'm not really choosing my words very carefully now...
Love it :) to the point yet funny as heck :)
:D hahaha, thankyou :)
LoL!! Funny stuuff!! (Y)
I am glad to have made you Laugh Out Loud :D
I'm glad I'm not the only one who found this funny. xD
Now I am traumatized for life! Nah, I'm over it.
hahahahaha, that made my day :)
Wow... short! Though it's rather sad, I did laugh slightly at the abrupt ending. Good job! :D
Thankyou!! :) I am a fan of stuff being short-simplicity is genius!!!
What can I say about this!
Very matter of fact. I liked it.
ahahahaha, this was an assignment from 4 yrs ago-I was too lazy bak then :D
Very small, yet enough to make me cry :( But I gotta admit, that was funny
hahaha, glad to have made you laugh :)
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