Poem by: Hinoglue
happy, dear, bird, sheep, flies, glee, bees, hinoglue
Submitted: August 09, 2011
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THIS MADE ME LAUGH TOO. IT IS A VERY HAPPY CHEERY POEM. A GREAT POEM TO HELP CHEER A PERSON UP IF THEY ARE FEELING DOWN. 8D WELL WRITTEN HUN
Thanks, I'm really glad you like it, it was kind of a fist thing seeing as I write dark poems! :)
At the fourth stanza I was thinking: "damn, that's a lot of 'flies'" but then suddenly: "dancing sheep" LOL WHUT?
:-P nice writing, funny and cheerful ^^
"I like it".
Yeah, he he, I was trying to make it sound nice, buthen I thought, 'Add "dancing sheep", It's kinda funny!'
This poem made me smile :)
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