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Start to Finish

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Flash Fiction  |  House: Booksie Classic
'Start to Finish now Children' - comment overheard at GCSE examination sitting.

Image by Johannes Plenio at Pixabay

Re-edit: 01.09.19

Submitted: July 05, 2019

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Start to Finish

He collided with Elspeth three years ago on a solitary walk to the race starting point, by the remnants of Pyle House on the River Crouch. He was ambling dreamily along the grassy path, the salty wind in his face. Watching the dragons zig-zag their way down river. Without a care in the world. She was sitting cross-legged in the long grass staring out across the muddy tidal water. When he fell on top of her and crushed her to death.


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