the scary beast

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Thrillers  |  House: Booksie Classic

We all have our own demons

I felt the chills, a distant blur

Any thing now may occur

It’s hard to know what things await

For all I know is i'm the bait. 


The black birds humming in despair

Chilling winds go past my hair

I keep having thoughts of me, so bloody

It took me hours just standing steady


As I look at the foggy stairs

I sensed the strike of those chilly glares

Voices in me start to shout

Things I don’t even care about


All I know is, it’s undead

Ice cold skin and eyes of red

The bloody image made me weak

Stairs so foggy start to creak


I reached up and I took my gun

I swore to myself, his days are gone

The killer I’m tracking, in front of me

i know it's scary but I can't see


It's the beast I was hunting for all these years

now is not the time for all my fears

The killer; the first one to strike

Doing things that it would like


I struggled, enough to stand up

And as I stood my heart has stopped.

For through the wind, the curtains have flown

In the moon’s light, the monster was shown.


It was so tall and so dark, it's skin

But I'm more shocked on what's within

Its Identity made me froze to death

Not even sighing any single breath


Ahead of me, what caught my sight

Is a shiny shard of glass attracting the moonlight

I am shocked by what I see

That scary beast, the killer…is me.

Submitted: January 08, 2012

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very good poem, and great ending too! keep up the good work :D

Sun, January 8th, 2012 9:22am


thank you so much.

Mon, January 9th, 2012 2:58am


woah!! this was amazing :3

Fri, February 3rd, 2012 3:26pm


thank you!

Sat, February 4th, 2012 2:01am

dying for you45

wait- so cool! i liked the twist i liked it all!

Sun, February 12th, 2012 8:39am



Sun, February 12th, 2012 1:17am


omg, that was the surprise part. You've really surprised us on the ending. I

Tue, February 14th, 2012 10:13am


thank you! for being surprized!

Tue, February 14th, 2012 3:21am

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