i give up dad

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

my dad called me on Thursday and asked me if i wanted to come over and hangout so i said yes he said "i could give you mom some gas money" well my mom didn't have any gas in the car to get me out there and thats what i told him then so he said "okay then ill get back to you on Friday" well to day is Monday he still hasn't called me on his wall post on Facebook it said im on vacation spending time with my new girlfriend and family but im not there so i got really upset

I hate you, I dont love you, dad I dont want you, just die I dont care to cry, you have made me mad, made me sad, made me want to be bad, to get you attention something I've never had, i'm mad just take me back, dad you have caused this, thats why i dont want this, you act as if it's normal to be like this, why cant you eccept who i am, for what I am, or who I want to be, what, do you hate me, do you not love me, I dont care seriously, I want to dissapear, I try my hardest to make it work, but dad your so stuck up, losen up, take a breath maybe you might come back, take a step torwards reality, realize your losing me, your daughter the one that loved you, but now i want to curse you, you dont love me, you hate me, I want to know why, what have I done to you in my life, I showed you my love and compasion, you shoved it n smashed it, thats why I say just forget it, your not worth it


Submitted: May 23, 2011

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arun

Uh a really nice way to cry out one's pain. Isn't it? Yes, words do heal our wounds. Nicely written. A few mistakes:

Why can't you except who i am - i think it is accept?

Lossen? - is there a word?

It is losing, not lossing.

Other than that, you made it pretty well all through. And try to mend it up like a poem. In the standard way, a poem is to be written. Ok?
I liked it. All the best.
Keep writing.

Mon, May 23rd, 2011 6:14am

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