The Boy In The Woods

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Submitted: January 15, 2018

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I chased a boy so fast through the woods dodging the trees coming at me. I remeber why I was so interested in this boy. For weeks I watched him stare at me hidding behind a tree. I would hollar he didn't respond then when I run toward the woods he'd run away so fast I couldn't catch him.
This time he really pissed me of because he was in fact starting to creep me out. I had a machette in my hand I had enough I was going to murder this boy. I couldnt get a real good look at his face but he was pale long brown hair and overalls and brown boots. He was so fast I almost wish he'd trip.
He laughed as I finally came to a hault the woods from that point were barbwired. And no one was allowed I heard very scary legends about tresspassing on the Coulter's land. Apparently they still lived in the old house never leaves their home and kills all tresspasser.
I didn't care I was fed up with that creepy Coulter boy I was gonna kill him. I knew I could get away with killing something that never exsited. I crawled underneath the barbwire then my head was smashed into the mud. 
Someone had their boot on the back of my head and takin my machette. I screamed at the top of my lungs. 
"i WOULDNT DO THAT."
STOPPING ME FROM SCREAMING.
"WHAT THE FUCK DO YOU THINK YOUR GONNA DO BOY!" 
THE BOY I WAS CHASING KNEALED DOWN WHERE I COLD SEE HIM. HIS EYES WERE BLUE AND DARK UNDERNEATH.
"CARSON I THINK HE WAS GONNA KILL ME WITH THIS MACHETTE."
"HE PROBABLY WAS NICKOLAI."
BY THAT TIME HE HAD ME PULLED OT FROM UNDERNEAH THE FENCE. THE ONE THEY CALLED CARSON  HAD TIED MY HANDS BEHIND MY BACK. I WATCH TWO MORE BOYS DRESSED ALL ALIKE COME OVER FROM THE HILL. THEY WHOOP AND hOLLARED LIKE THEY CATCH THEM SELVES A WILD GAME.
"LETS KILL HIM."
"NO. NO NICKOLAI WE ARE NOT MURDERS."
SINCE WHEN carson." the tallest one laughed.
'We need us a prisoner."
"That'd be awesome never had ne of them."
"Just think abot how much less work we have to do if we made him."
"Really you guys." I finally forced myself to say.
"Yeah really."
"Don't you think someone will come looking for me."
Carson laughed," Boy were the Coullter's no one dare fuck's with us."
"Not even the swat team."
"Of course that would be a complete devastion knowing once they cross over onto our land we'll open fire."
I didnt say anything just swallowed real hard.
"We dont give a fuck and that puts their lifes at stake so they rather not."
"Please. "
"Now he's begging."

They had forced me to go with them I no match for the four of them.  The travel to their home was far in fact it was getting dark when I saw the big old white house across from a lake. WE had to get in a small paddle boat to reach it, the house was huge with big windows. They had electricity and more boys outside in a garden. All eyes were focused on me as we walked up the hill.


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