A poem about when I was thinking over dumping my bf... I had never dumped someone before but I had good reason... I dumped him and it was really hard... Please comment!!

 

You,

You tear my heart,

Which way,

I don’t know

 

Are you the kind one?

Are you the mean one?

Are you the selfish one?

Are you the player?

 

Who are you?

Do I know you?

 

No,

I don’t

It was a mistake

 

Do I love you?

NO

 

My heart is deprived,

Deprived from love,

For to long,

It lies to me

Like you

 

What to do?

What side do I take?

 

Are you right?

Is everyone else right?

Or is my silent heart right?

 

How will I do it?

We are the same

Yet so different

What to do

 

I want no feelings hurt

No hearts broken

But it is inevitable

 

You will be hurt

I will be hurt

 

No ones heart is safe

Not from me

 


Submitted: October 28, 2011

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Christian Taylor

Love hurts...I know that one too well! Excellent poem! XD

Sun, October 30th, 2011 6:04pm

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Yes I know.. Thankyou!!!

Sun, October 30th, 2011 2:17pm

RA Nolan

Wow I am loving this poem!!!! Great Job

Mon, November 7th, 2011 1:58am

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I'm glad you are! Thanks!!

Sun, November 6th, 2011 6:02pm

ghoul24

Don't think the heart is lying. It's a matter of control, thinking about what's right or wrong, figuring out the truth. It's nobody's fault that things happen. As things go on, the heart may feel colder, but it gets stronger.

No one's heart is safe from you? Hey, there are people out there who can handle such things. I'm not very sure I'm making sense, but don't feel like nobody's heart is unsafe, because really, things will get better soon. :)

Wed, November 9th, 2011 3:51am

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True... This poem is about when I was thinking about breaking up with a bf who I had heard some very bad things from... It was also the first person I had broken up with... I had always been the dumpee... kinda XD That time seems like a long time away...

Tue, November 8th, 2011 7:56pm

Walmart Lover

i like!

Thu, November 10th, 2011 6:42am

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I'm glad you like it XD

Thu, November 10th, 2011 1:35pm

Yasuko

The heart is beautiful, mean, can make us happy or even torture us. I like your poem, great work :)

Mon, December 5th, 2011 6:06am

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It is XD Thanks!

Mon, December 5th, 2011 1:25pm

beyonder91

Nice. I think it's a unique way of showing the mind asking the heart whether its right in love by asking it questions. That's what we should do, asking ourselves whether we really love or not, whom and all that, cos the mind should always take precedence over the heart, not the other way round.

Tue, December 6th, 2011 6:20am

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Thanks! I'm glad you like it!

Tue, December 6th, 2011 1:29pm

dlalilove

Wow! Love this poem. :)

Fri, December 9th, 2011 7:45am

Author
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Thanks! I'm glad you do XD thanks!

Fri, December 9th, 2011 2:50am

marinanick

Out of all your poems, I love this one the most :)

Sat, March 10th, 2012 11:37am

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Thanks!

Mon, March 12th, 2012 2:21pm

Reginatotheb

This was very good! Your word choice each held their own. It said what it had to in a unique way and conveyed the message of " I can't please you if my heart is pretending to please me" - nice write!

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