-Can I Be You

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Submitted: October 22, 2011

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Can I be you, being in your shoes feels different then mine. If you had felt the pain that I held inside. Then you would not want to be in my shoes.

So can I be you, feeling the pain nearly tore me apart from the inside. But recently I've known you, for some time now.

Do you think , you can take my place and see what I see ?. I wish that I was there with you, saying goodbye was the hardest thing to do.

But if you were in my shoes, would you set a different path on the road of life.

Every candle was lit, as I was standing near you. When everything was done

the flame was blown out.

Now and then I would cry for you, seeing your picture brings me pain even more.

The more I see it, the more it hurts.

My heart had fallen when you left , there was nothing left for me here.

Do you think , god could give me another chance?. A chance to start something new.

June 11th

2009


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