Messages Sent And Undelivered

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Humor  |  House: Booksie Classic

Ever sent messages that are never received. It happens all the time.

Messages Sent And Undelivered

Messages are made from words
And words can mean so much,
If you can't rely on delivery
It's hard to keep in touch.
You spend time on their composing
Thinking what to say
 You want to get it worded right
Before sending on its way.
But then it seems to disappear
Leaving not a trace
It doesn't seem to get to you
But stays in cyberspace.
It can be so frustrating
When I'm trying to get through
But it's worth all the hassle
'Cause I love to 'speak' to you.
So if I don't seem to respond
Please don't be offended
Your message might have done the same
--- Become cyberspace suspended.

 


Submitted: May 13, 2016

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DLCannon

Text messages get lost sometimes too, I'd rather have some one in arms reach, but I guess sometimes God doesn't let us have a say-so. Nice poem!

Fri, May 13th, 2016 5:25pm

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Thank you again. I find it realy frustrating when it comes up with the Message Sent sign and then the message seems never to be seen again.

Fri, May 13th, 2016 10:36am

DLCannon

Yeah, it happens.

Fri, May 13th, 2016 5:40pm

Mike Stevens

Yep, you've described the old disappearing message frustration quite accurately!

Fri, May 13th, 2016 7:16pm

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Thank you, Mike. I'm sure you've experienced it plenty of times in all your years on Booksie.

Fri, May 13th, 2016 1:06pm

JE Falcon aka JEF

A fun read, thanks!

Sat, May 14th, 2016 5:53pm

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Glad you enjoyed it, JE.

Sat, May 14th, 2016 10:55am

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