Pandemonium -- a haiku

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic


Pandemonium

 

A rampage of thought,

the mind dissolves to chaos.

Pandemonium!


Submitted: November 15, 2017

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Reaper

Sweet I like it. How about dissolves instead of devolves. Suggestion.

Wed, November 15th, 2017 8:42pm

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Okay, was just trying to think of the right word -- it's funny how it escapes some time. I'll go and change that now! Thanks for the solution, Reaper!

Wed, November 15th, 2017 12:51pm

jaylisbeth

Concise and meaningful, Hully! Lovely cover photo.

Wed, November 15th, 2017 8:57pm

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I wanted something really colorful to match the muddled thoughts! Thanks for reading, jaylisbeth!

Wed, November 15th, 2017 1:07pm

Sue Harris

Sounds like a nightmare! Nice one Hully.

Wed, November 15th, 2017 9:20pm

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Thanks, Sue!

Wed, November 15th, 2017 2:05pm

Mike S.

Great haiku, Hull!

Wed, November 15th, 2017 10:06pm

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Thank you, Mike. The state of my mind this morning!

Wed, November 15th, 2017 2:20pm

Jeff Bezaire

You summed it up perfectly. I've also just learned that pandemonium is a five syllable word. :)

Wed, November 15th, 2017 11:50pm

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You've no idea how often I counted it out to check, Jeff!

Thanks so much for reading.

Thu, November 16th, 2017 12:40am

Katilly

I didn’t even realise pandemonium was a five-syllable word until now. It certainly goes great in a haiku!

Sat, November 18th, 2017 5:31am

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Ha! I didn't either until I counted it out a few times! Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to comment.

Sat, November 18th, 2017 4:48am

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