It's about a stalker turned rapist ... bit intense I suppose..

Covered in your thick blood,
I can't see anything but that cold red mud.
 It's all over me, head to toe,
I wish so much that I could have let go.
Stalking me from every corner of every wall and spot,
I was scared and shaken, that's what you had brought.
Never forgetting it, you came after me,
 I woke up one day, and had hoped it all had been a dream.
He stood above me, hovering with deep thoughts,
I could do nothing but give him what he sought.
 He tore at my clothes, took my only secret left for me to keep,
 What a creep.
 Raped by force, slideshow is stuck in  my mind,
I had wished I had gone blind.
 I once saw the knife he hid in his pocket, it was forever in my hand.
 I only wished I blocked out the pain with the sound of a band.
 I quickly screamed as he took,
Cried as I shook,
 The pain was like no other, he covered my mouth with his hand, keeping me quiet.
If there was to be anyone around, I would have started a screaming riot.
It hurt so much, I wanted to cry,
I only feared that I might die.
I took the knife and stabbed him in the gut.
 He moved off of me, shocked and in pain as I ran and closed my door shut.
 His blood and my blood covered all around.
I called 911 and wished he was found.

Submitted: August 20, 2008

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woah. intense, indeed. really good.

Wed, August 20th, 2008 7:27pm


Thanks! :)

Sun, September 28th, 2008 9:10pm


whoa........ really intense. talk about scary..

Fri, August 22nd, 2008 5:22pm


Yeah.. it was scary just writing it.. thanks for the comment ^.^

Sun, September 28th, 2008 9:12pm

chante baxer

thats all i can say
but you write really well

Sun, November 16th, 2008 5:57am


Thank you :)

Mon, November 17th, 2008 11:46am


That was scary reminding myself not 2 read scary stories after 9 but
it is good;p

Sun, August 5th, 2012 1:57am


Lol thank you!

Sun, August 5th, 2012 8:57am


an incredible piece. i felt every word piercing my heart. that's what makes you a great writer.. you know how to make the reader "feel" in your writing. great job. keep it up!

Mon, October 24th, 2016 6:17pm


Thank you so much!

Sun, December 4th, 2016 3:17pm

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