battlefield of the people

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ok this poem is full of the words my teacher wanted me to put in it and thy all had to rhyme since i fit all of the words in it and they rhymed i got a 100% and i want you all to tell me what you think

brave enough to try soaring through the sky remember of those who are dead to honor of what they have did there remains shall drift down below there grave showing what they became remember those who have perish for what god created were equal ammounts i highly approve we dedicate our love from up above and i finally gave my devotion and the final thing on my list is to check the statue of liberty to see if its still lit to my surprise i cannot believe my eyes it is lit shining bright like the stars its truly a sight to behold thank you all for listening to all that has been told i hope you have these feelings that i just shared with you.

Submitted: December 28, 2011

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i love wild life

ok so all of my readers know i was trying to make the title be called battlefield but since that title is taken it's now battlefield of the people.

Wed, December 28th, 2011 8:45pm

Jaded Reality

Wow this great! Keep up the good job check out my profile sometime! :)

Wed, December 28th, 2011 10:17pm

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thanks and i will check it out :)

Wed, December 28th, 2011 3:22pm

luvbug1

this is really good keep it up

Wed, December 28th, 2011 11:26pm

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thanks :) i am working on putting more of my poems i created up the next poem is called dancing with wolfs.

Wed, December 28th, 2011 3:29pm

XxlulucrossxX

You write AMAZING poems! O-o Very good! :DDD

Thu, December 29th, 2011 12:51am

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thanks :) it's seems when i write poems at school i get out of trouble because they are to busy admiring my work....

Wed, December 28th, 2011 5:21pm

Vampire Girl

I have no idea how I keep finding amazing poets on here. I dont even like poetry! But, THIS IS AMAZING.

Thu, December 29th, 2011 1:46am

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thanks :)

Wed, December 28th, 2011 6:03pm

I Am Emo And I Love It

Awesome! It really spoke to me, keep up the good work.

Thu, December 29th, 2011 11:24am

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thanks =)

Thu, December 29th, 2011 5:11pm

Hadass

This is really good. Write lots more and stay out of trouble!!! :)

Thu, December 29th, 2011 2:25pm

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i don't get in trouble my best friend Sam does....

Thu, December 29th, 2011 5:14pm

Jitterbuglove

great poem i luved it

Fri, December 30th, 2011 8:39pm

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thanks i am glad you loved it :)

Fri, December 30th, 2011 7:47pm

Lunaa

I love it.
~Lunaa

Tue, January 3rd, 2012 10:51pm

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thanks i am glad i am doing a good job

Wed, January 4th, 2012 6:49pm

haunt sorrow

This is epicly awesome. You get talent. Hope to see more of your work. Love it. I fyou don't mind, come over to my page and check out some of my work. I would apprecate it. Thanks

Haunt

Mon, January 9th, 2012 4:59am

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ok i will and i am glad you love it.................

Tue, January 10th, 2012 7:08pm