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Poem by: Ian Dawn

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I just feel down tonight I cant explain it maybe its the thoughts in my head the daemon I fight constantly, but all I want is a hug. is that so much to ask for?

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Submitted: October 20, 2011

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Submitted: October 20, 2011

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Why do I feel so upset?

When I have people that love me

I dont understand whats wrong

Am I to blinded by hate to see

 

Why do I feel so Angry?

When I am surrounded by love

I cant feel the difference it makes

Am I to closed to be free like a dove

 

Why do I feel singled out and alone?

When there are people all around

I am looking but no0one sees

Am I invisible as if covered by a shroud

 

Why am I thinkg suicidal thoughts?

When they tell me how great I am

I think they are all lying to me

Am I  just part of a huge scam

 

Why and I here at all?

When I know thay don't care

I can hear their whispers

Am I imagining their cold stare

 

Why do I want to die?

When my life is special to me

I know they walk past unknowing

Am I destined to do this to be free.

 


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I just feel down tonight I cant explain it maybe its the thoughts in my head the daemon I fight constantly, but all I want is a hug. is that so much to ask for?

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