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I sent a fan request to someone, and asked that they read my work, and become a fan of mine, and because of the thoughtless, and rude reply, I decided to write this poem about them, I feel much better now! But why does anybody have to be rude?

Submitted: July 29, 2009

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Submitted: July 29, 2009

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I pity your ignorance, it must cause you pain,
your stupid remark drives me insane,
I wonder if it's hormones, or the fact your still young,
 that makes you soooo incredibly dumb
I asked to become one of your fans,
and you wrote some rude shit, it wounded me, damn.
I won't do it again, I can take a hint,
you don't like to have fans, so consider the request unsent.
All in all I've lost little, and what have you gained,
you've lost a reader, my emotions are slightly pained.
a bimbo, a bunny, I don't know which one,
but I'll tell you what I do know, you are not much fun.
your writing was good, but nothing real grand,
and soon it will fade like writing in the sand.
I will get published, and I'll poke fun at you,
because of your rudeness, you're the loser, it's true!


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